06.10: Dead Men Don’t Drown

Wally Dog ceramic Staffordshire dogs in the window of an English house

Dead Men Don’t Drown: #9

(catch-up with all episodes here)

Episode 9 Dead Men Don’t Drown

Clive receives me in the basement office beneath his terraced house, one hand resting on the walking stick beside his chair and the other holding a book against his chest as though it has weight enough to steady him.

There are no windows, only shelves, a green-shaded lamp, a two-sided oak desk built for clerks who distrust comfort, and the deep, dry smell of old paper lying in layers like weather.

His wife brings tea and ginger snaps on a tray, smiles once, and leaves so quietly that the closing door feels less like an exit than a seal.

“You asked about probate,” Clive says, dipping his fountain pen into a glass jar of ink, “but probate is only where the thread begins.”

He opens a buff folder tied with faded tape and lays out the court order declaring Jacob Macleod dead, the life-insurance correspondence, and a trawler policy stamped PAID in red so bright it seems still wet.

Then, without looking at me, he places one finger beneath the settlement date and says, “Fast work, for a widow who had not yet buried her husband.”

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word SNAP. Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.

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17 responses to “06.10: Dead Men Don’t Drown”

  1. And the yarn keeps spinning…

    (Excellent soundtrack)

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    1. Thank you! And now to write The Alcove. It’s a snap, as the saying goes. 😂

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  2. It sounds like Jacob and his wife might both be involved in his disappearance.

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  3. quick work with your characters… already don’t like this Clive all troglodytic in his musty basement lair

    lol I don’t know! you created him too well

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    1. That’s because he is real, although that’s not his name, and the office in the basement is real also, although that’s associated with a different person and a different circumstance. 😂

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  4. Ooh, that last sentence… fancy that. More digging then, yes?

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    1. Yes, a wee bit more!

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  5. The mystery deepens (shopping list for next week – more popcorn!).

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    1. I’ll bring ice cream (and two spoons)

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  6. ooh the mystery deepens 🙌

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  7. Indeed it does! 😂

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  8. Ooh. That certainly is fast work. I wonder if he is alive or died on a bit… weirder circumstances or if… that place just enjoys rumours… who knows… who knows…

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  9. Looks like things are getting more mysterious, Misky…

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    1. I wonder if she regrets even looking into this mystery! 😂

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      1. I’m wondering the same… 😂

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  10. She may find more than she bargained for.

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    1. And she might yet surprise us all, Mimi.

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