06.10 dVerse Quadrille 257

photo of various pebbles on a beach

What I Carry

Taken from a pebble-dashed beach, this piece
of sharp-edged flint, a gift from his small hand

into my pocket — and I carry it around,
its weight warm against my hip. It’s as if

his hand still holds both it
and my autumn

heart.

Written for dVerse Poets, a quadrille of forty-four words including pocket. Photograph is my own taken on Eastbourne beach. ©Misky 2006-2026.

32 responses to “06.10 dVerse Quadrille 257”

  1. My mind drifts back to cherished moments with my daughter, then further back to time spent with my father. It’s the little moments that matter most.

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    1. It is, without doubt. Memories to hold you for a lifetime.

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  2. So touching–those little reminders and memories are so special.

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    1. That little stone is sitting on my windowsill now. ❤️

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  3. Such a wonderful, touching poem!

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  4. What a lovely warm poem..Just like the pocket it describes.

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    1. Thanks so very much!

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  5. Warm and wonderful, Misky.🤍

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    1. Thank you! 🙏

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  6. A pocketful of sweet memories to treasure!

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    1. Absolutely! That little stone sits on the kitchen windowsill.

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  7. “my autumn
    heart.”

    way evocative set of words, yo

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    1. Thank you!
      I’d tried … my winter / heart … but that felt like I was waiting to die, which I am not, so I went with autumn.

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  8. “My autumn heart” is such a beautiful, evocative line! There’s something so grounding about carrying a small token from a loved one—it really does keep that warmth alive with you wherever you go. Lovely poem!

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    1. Thank you so very much!

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  9. Misky, I adore “my autumn/heart.” The line break. The visual it evokes. What a precious thing to hold in both your pocket and your heart.

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    1. Thank you, De, and thanks for the quadrille!

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  10. Your quadrille melted my heart, Marilyn. I love the ‘pebble-dashed beach’, which reminds me of a trip to Brighton with my daughter when she was little,  and the ‘sharp-edged flint, a gift from his small hand’ – I have a stone Lucas painted for me last Halloween.

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    1. How lovely to have such a gift from Lucas. (big smile)

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  11. Aye, pebbles… smiling.

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    1. Wonderful, colourful, rattling underfoot pebbles. And skipping stones!

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  12. Misky, so loving your affectionate poem. Stones are memory keepers.

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    1. They are very much so.

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  13. As others have mentioned this is a lovely affectionate piece of writing. Nicely done Misky 👏

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    1. Thank you so much, Shaun.

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  14. This is so beautiful in the way it moves me Misky, and yes, such gifts are precious.

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  15. Thank you so very much, Paul.

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