5 June: Is This Tragedy

Is This Tragedy

She’s at this land’s edge
looking into machete-sharp light.
He’s leaving.
He’s burning it all down.

His ship sails out of her echoes
into a taunting sea.
Her heart leaks music.
She watches land’s end.


Written for K. Hartless Petite Pen at Yardsale of Thoughts, painting by Vincente Romero. ©Misky 2022 Shared with #amwriting on Twitter

6 responses to “5 June: Is This Tragedy”

  1. that second stanza is particularly fabulous!

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    1. Thank you! ❤️

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  2. Beautiful, sharp light and the leaking song ties this together perfectly for me. And the questioning title. Victory and tragedy are not easy to discern anymore. What a thought-provoking piece of brevity. Thank you for writing to this prompt with me. Magical, this one.

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    1. Thank you! Do you post these on a particular day? I’ve not seen these prompts before.

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      1. It’s been random so far, but I’m find Tuesdays that I’m super tired from multiple classes. Brevity is about the perfect portion those days. 😂🪶💜

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  3. Beautiful writing.

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