0109: Dead Men Don’t Drown

Dead Men Don’t Drown: Episode #4

Wally Dog ceramic Staffordshire dogs in the window of an English house

(catch-up with all episodes here)

No. 4, Dead Men Don’t Drown: The Antique Shop on Rope Walk

I walk into town for bread, milk and a box of wooden matches for the coal fire; inheriting a cottage means inheriting an endless list of small errands.

Halfway home, a fleck of gilt light stops me in front of the antique shop’s window; among the brassware and china stands a pair of Staffordshire earthenware spaniels, their glaze uncracked and their ears sharply pricked, as though nobody had ever told them their work was finished.

Curiosity draws me inside where I pick up the brass telescope, polished so often that the metal shines brighter than the view it was built to find — and there they are: the dogs, their eyes fixed somewhere beyond the weather-etched window. They seem less interested in the shop than what lies outside it.

“They be Love Dogs,” the shopkeeper says, her reflection filling the glass before her voice reaches me, and when I tell her I have a pair exactly like them on my windowsill, also facing the harbour, she pauses over a china plate and says, “’Tis a heavy cross to bear, missus, that he be took.”

I carry the bread, milk, and matches home beneath a sky hanging over Rye Harbour like a damp cloth, wondering why a stranger might hear loss in the direction a pair of dogs faced, and how ceramic dogs could possibly know the difference between waiting and abandonment.

The Wind That Shakes the Barley

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “fire”.  Previous episodes are “here“. Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

26 responses to “0109: Dead Men Don’t Drown”

  1. Ah, now I can comment! I had to re-subscribe. I’m enjoying these short atmospheric stories and I have a ghostly feeling that there is more to Gran and Jacob than their granddaughter imagines.

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    1. I am so pleased, Jane, that you’re able to comment again, and yes, there’s a great deal more here than meets the eye.

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      1. It’s a steep learning curve!
        Looking forward to developments.

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  2. I love this Misky! Such a great story! 🙂

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    1. I’m delighted to hear that. Thank you, Carol Anne.

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  3. There’s a truth between loss and abandonment that speaks clear to those with the heart to listen…

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    1. In my experience, Liz, there are very few people who have the right heart for listening, and only listening.

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  4. My favorite line: “… I pick up the brass telescope, polished so often that the metal shines brighter than the view it was built to find…”

    A delightful series, Misky. I’m thoroughly enjoying the leisurely development of the story.

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    1. Thank you, Denise, and I am particularly touched that you left your lovely comment before I had a chance to link up. I appreciate that.

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  5. […] For Six Sentence Stories and the writers who spread their imaginative ink each week. When I was a child, Mum said […]

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  6. I am enjoying this… a lot. Such a good song, while I was thinking about the Rope Walk – there is something similar in the ‘pool.

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    1. I’ve never been to Liverpool. One day I think Peder and I must make the journey. And thank you, I’m glad that you’re enjoying this slightly slower paced story. But things will pick up, I promise. (grinning)

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  7. I love your writing style Misky great atmosphere and build up – something magical is about to happen I can feel it in my bones 🙌

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    1. Thank you so much! See you next week!

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  8. I wonder if the Love Dogs are the shopkeeper’s own Staffordshire earthenware spaniels.

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  9. (Denise stepped on my choice of fave phrase…) be that as it may, enjoyed the ‘quiet’ tone of your 1st person POV

    Made me think of ‘Widow Walks’ found on 18th C homes on Nantucket and Martha’s Vineyard

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    1. Ty.
      Not completely dissimilar; wives waiting.

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  10. Such a very delightful story, Misky 👍

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    1. Thank you so much.

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      1. You’re most welcome ☺️

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  11. It’s nice to hear the shopkeeper keeps all her wares in pristine condition, and if indeed she is a stranger what a mysterious, knowing comment.

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    1. The shopkeeper is a stranger, and yes indeed, such a mysterious thing to say (in Sussex dialect).

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  12. I like that the shopkeeper called them “Love Dogs.” She seems to know things.

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    1. She certainly has Fenella thinking!

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  13. hmm, these dogs seem mysterious now, I wonder what is the story behind it. And I still love the way you write!

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    1. I’m glad to know you’re comfortable with the change of “voice”. Fenella’s voice is quite different from Brigid’s, but then their perspectives are from different centuries. I hope you’re enjoying your weekend, Reelika.

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