2906: Six Sentence Story

Brigid and Felreil Arrive in Room 215

Brigid and Felreil came through the hidden closet of Room 215 as though stepping between centuries were merely a poor plan carried out with good manners, and Felreil, without visible surprise, laid his French Imperial Navy-cut coat across a time-aged leather wing-back chair with the air of a man reserving territory in a foreign campaign.

At the chair’s elbow stood a bellhop-automaton of decidedly lesser stature, red-jacketed, pillbox-hatted, one gloved hand fumbling industriously in its waistcoat while its clockwork gaze held Felreil’s with the grave offence of an equal interrupted.

Felreil looked it over, murmured, “Lilliput,” then turned with Victorian courtesy to the Tall Thin Man and extended his hand, saying, “Lemuel Gulliver, I presume,” before bowing slightly to la Raconteuse, smiling at Chris as though the room’s absurdity had at least remembered to be well introduced.

When he took Frank’s hand, his glance dropped to the white cloth at the man’s wrist and he added, with the dry concern of one who has seen too many ports and too many wars, “From this rising Crimea mess, perhaps; I trust the wound is not deep.”

Brigid, by then gone pale with the strain of accidental time travel and the general tide of other people’s stories, sank into the wing-back chair and managed only, “Dizzy,” whereupon the bellhop at last produced an intertitle card and held it aloft with mechanical triumph.

“Cake is the answer — who cares what the question is.”


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word plan  Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

13 responses to “2906: Six Sentence Story”

  1. and cake it shall be

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    1. Aye! You can’t buy happiness, but you can buy cake!

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  2. I have to totally agree with the cake cure!

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    1. … with ice cream!

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  3. I LOVE that the couple have found themselves at the café! And yes, cake is always a good reaction to surprising turns in a story!

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    1. The series ends this week, and what better way to pull them out of Provence than a portal into the SSC&B’s room 215!

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      1. Can’t think of anything better or more well-deserved!

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  4. Had I known that the CC4CD cake would get so much attention, I would have used it a long time ago!

    Loving when someone appears in the SSC&B and doesn’t inform us from about point of departure/destination… just dances in the rhythm of imagination and creative writing free of boundaries.
    Welcome, B&F.

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    1. (big smile: thank you)

      Felreil with a slight nod of his head and a bow, smiled “Thank you, Gatekeeper. It is a pleasure to accept the kind invitation,” while Brigid, still recovering herself and thinking of cake, nodded slowly, once — typical of Irish conversation without need of voice nor word. 

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  5. Very well-done.

    Will be back… Monday brain. need to get closer to Wednesday to ‘get into character’

    …and that’s a thing about ‘walk-ons’ in general and your visit in particular, the challenge to our craft.

    (At least speaking for myself, the fun lies in finding ways to enter an established reality (albeit a fictional one) in such a way as to not raise an eyebrow. Other than the delight of ‘Hey! Look who decided to stop in!”

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    1. Thank you for the warm welcome, Tall Thin Man.

      (It also coincided with finishing the ‘Provence Diary’ series, and brought these two characters, who seem oblivious to the nature of time, back into the present.)

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  6. Well, I wasn’t expecting that! That’s a great entrance and more… plus cake, indeed. And a moment later la Raconteuse will wander off with another thought!

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    1. The power of the pen; Brigid and Felreil hasn’t expected it either.

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