2406: Six Sentence Story

old man and woman walking on an English pier

Clam Chowder


Summer heatwave; you’ve fallen asleep with The Telegraph spread across your knees.

I remember our second date: we spoke of death, a girlfriend, a fire, a club with locked exits; only those who’d paid went in.

Most of them didn’t, you paused, and I finished the sentence.

It was that time of year when the sun set later and later, the horizon awash with stars as we ate clam chowder; you charged it to the company card, and I paid for the ice cream.

Years later, you claimed to hate clams.

I laughed; I always laugh when you lie.

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “charge”.  Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

30 responses to “2406: Six Sentence Story”

  1. What a lovely write 😃❤️

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    1. Thank you so much!

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  2. Simply…. (big smile, Misky), lovely.

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    1. Thanks, Denise. I’m delighted that you enjoyed it.

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  3. Clam chowder and ice cream set the mood for enjoying a sunset.

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    1. And I still love clam chowder, although it’s as scarce as hen’s teeth in the UK.

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  4. What they said* excellent Six

    *cept for the clam chowder part lol

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    1. I’m thinking that you skim over the Fish and Shellfish section of the restaurant menu, eh? Peder has suddenly gone off sea bass. At this rate my repertoire will diminish to corn flakes.

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  5. Theatre playing trailers of future past perfect movies.

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    1. (big smile) I love that. And it is just like that, isn’t it? This started out as an Everywhere Poem, and ‘then I looked at it again, ‘listened’ to it, and realised that the dips in tone made it feel like a Six.

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  6. Aww, that’s so sweet.

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    1. Thank you. Just a couple more years, and we’ll celebrate our 50th.

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  7. So deliciosly intimate!

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  8. Sweet familiarity of a long life lived together. 💙❤️💙

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  9. This is so lovely and something similar happened with the tiramisu I made every year for my other half… I found him sitting on the kitchen floor in the middle of the night eating the cake (all of it alone on his birthday) and now the dude hates tiramisu.

    lol 🤣

    such a lovely write, seriously.

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    1. That gave me a true moment of recognition. I have something similar with chocolate truffles.

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  10. i love the reflection of small chitchat between longtime lovers/partners/married people…. a familarity that lives each day in building memories upon memories.. like a treasure chest opened on special occasions

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    1. Such a lovely comment! Thank you!

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  11. There’s something about knowing the other so well. It takes a lifetime.

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    1. It does, Mimi, and we’ve been together for a very long time.

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  12. Nice last line about lying. I hadn’t thought before that clam chowder and ice cream go together, but they do go well with anything.

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    1. And if it’s your birthday you get your ice cream before your dinner!

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  13. Lovely poem and I love that song too. Perfect.

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  14. ice cream, yes! Clam chowdar, nope!

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    1. Oh dear. I love clam chowder!

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