30.05: Journal of SenHai

an aerial view of waves crashing over a submerged shipwreck at sea. The water shows us varying hues of colour, but primarily green.

Journey’s End

Senryu
the voyage ended
now the currents ask the wreck
which way they should turn

Haiku
green tides cross the wreck
waves recall what wood forgot
the sea writes anew


Written for SenHai Saturday #54. ©Misky 2006-2026. The image is an aerial view of waves crashing over a submerged shipwreck at sea. The water shows us varying hues of colour, but primarily green.

16 responses to “30.05: Journal of SenHai”

  1. Great pairing Misky – your senryū captures the bitter irony of failure while the haiku zooms out, showing how nature erases and turns a tragedy into a fresh start – brilliant 🙌

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    1. Many thanks! 🙏

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  2. Well done, and so fitting. ~Nan

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  3. Amazing lines, Misky! ❤

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    1. Thank you, Susi!

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  4. Beautifully done, Misky.

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    1. Thank you! 🙏

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  6. Beautiful as always. Excellent senryu!

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