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2504: Journal of SenHai

rainbow at the seashore

Senryu
after all that rain
the sky apologises
in seven colours

Haiku
rainbow to the sea
dark clouds loosen into light
tideways gleam again

Written for Saturday SenHai #49 . image by Kym Ellis – Unsplash.com ©Misky 2006-2026.

Misky

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25 responses to “2504: Journal of SenHai”

  1. Liz H-H avatar
    Liz H-H

    Brilliant and vivid!

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you! I always writing to Susi’s image prompt on Saturdays.

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  2. Violet Lentz avatar
    Violet Lentz

    I love the sky’s apologies!

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thanks, Violet.

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  3. poetisatinta avatar
    poetisatinta

    Brilliantly done especially the first piece 👏

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you! I’m rather fond of the first one also.

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        poetisatinta

        🩷

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  4. clark avatar
    clark

    write out of a blues song, ‘the sky is cryin’

    fun with words, fer sure

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you, Clark.

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    Spira

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      What a lovely song. And a lovely voice. What a lovely surprise.

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  6. Barnadhya Rwitam avatar
    Barnadhya Rwitam

    So well written, Misky! 🙂

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you!

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  7. Susi Bocks avatar
    Susi Bocks

    Knocked it out of the park again this week, Misky! Have you ever considered self-publishing a book of your gems yet?? If not, please DO! You are such a talent!

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      Misky

      Thank you so much, Susi.

      My latest book, a project with black white film photography by Nick Maroudis and poems by me, is at Blurb’s worldwide store at https://www.blurb.com/b/12819231

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        Susi Bocks

        ❤ Wonderful, thanks for sharing!

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  8. Sadje/ Sadie avatar
    Sadje/ Sadie

    Both the poems are lovely

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      Misky

      Thank you, Sadie.

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      1. Sadje/ Sadie avatar
        Sadje/ Sadie

        You’re most welcome 🙏🏼

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  9. Cale Caron avatar
    Cale Caron

    What a glorious rainbow!!!!

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      Misky

      (big smile)

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        Cale Caron

        😊

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  11. purplepeninportland avatar
    purplepeninportland

    That senyru is brilliant, Misk!

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you!

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