02.04: The Old Woman Without a Cat

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The Old Woman With No Cat and the Crow

the old woman with no cat
sits in her wicker chair,
spring sunlight
warming her bones, arranged

like kindling
waiting for warmth from a match.

a crow hops across the lawn,
its feathers oil-slick black,
a hole in the world’s brightness,

one foot, then the other—
then it stops, cocks its head,
and looks at her with the neglect
of a rusted key.

I know you. the crow blinks,
and the old woman shifts in her chair,
groans like a tree
deciding whether it should fall.

she offers the crow
no shiny trinkets, no apologies,
only this:
her stillness, which is not patience,
but the slow erosion of hurry.

the crow flaps onto the fence.
it does not say goodbye—
goodbyes are for creatures
who believe in later.

the sun warms her ribs, and
somewhere, a cat (not hers, never hers)
is howling for a fight.

the old woman closes her eyes—
the crow was never hers either,
but for a moment,
they shared the same secret:

time is an unreliable guest.

More silliness written for Writers’ Digest Poem-a-Day Challenge Day 2 “From where I sit…”


This is an experiment in the style of The Dead Man poems by Marvin Bell. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

15 responses to “02.04: The Old Woman Without a Cat”

    1. This is not only my favourite movie, but this music is magic. My sunny morning thanks you. 🎶☀️

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    1. Thank you so very much, Caleb.

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  1. Wonderful Misky 😀

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  2. Great! How could this be expressed more artfully?

    “her stillness, which is not patience,
    but the slow erosion of hurry.”

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    1. I am delighted! Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

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  3. barbara_e_young avatar
    barbara_e_young

    *grinning hugely*

    the cat ate my first comment, but its essence was that this is nifty. There were such a bunch of especiallys that it was getting silly because I do like the idea as well as the gravy (and the gravy is delicious).

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    1. I might run this line until it’s in the ground. I’m having rather a lot of fun with it.

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  4. You mentioned silliness? It’s rather profound I think. Will be looking out for crows who think they know me from now on.

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    1. I’m delighted you enjoyed it. Thanks!

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  5. her stillness, which is not patience,
    but the slow erosion of hurry.

    I loved this, I know exactly that to which you refer!!

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    1. Thank you! That phrase seems to resonate with a lot of us. 😂

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