4 April: A Triolet for NaPoWriMo

AI artwork in style of Edward Ardizzone. A cartoon of a person looking up at clouds and stars.

A Witness

Oh, if only it existed
in the silence of traveled clouds,
the language of peace from afar,
oh, if only it existed.
A soul’s asylum bound by stars –
a witness to silent words,
oh, if only it existed
in the silence of traveled clouds.


Written for NaPoWriMo Day 4: Form poem, a triolet; constraints of ABaAabAB; in iambic tetramenter AI Digital Artwork is created using Midjourney. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023 Shared on Twitter #amwriting @midjourney @napowrimo2023

10 responses to “4 April: A Triolet for NaPoWriMo”

  1. The imagery left me spellbound 💖 So lovely ma’am 😄

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    1. Thank you. ❤️

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  2. “A soul’s asylum bound by stars…” Tastiest line in a delicious triolet, M. Thanks.

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  3. I loved this. I do find peace “in the silence of travelled clouds.”

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  4. Triolet–hard to write sometimes. I know I’ve tried this one. Yours was great.

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    1. Thanks, Jamie!

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  5. How beautifully written!! I loved the imagery and the picture won my heart.

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