21 February: RDP – Twilight

AI artwork. Colombian village. White washed houses with red tile roofs.
The It of It All   

She wants to be Mary Oliver, 
or Count Tolstoy, but that 

creates all sorts of pronoun 
issues she can't understand. 

So she sits on the balcony, 
and takes in views of town, 

its white-limed houses with 
low roofs, and rose gardens. 

She thinks of having a smoke, 
forgetting she quit years ago, 

and watches a jaundice-yellow 
sun surrendering to twilight. 

Written for Twiglet’s “trick of light” and RDP “twilight”. AI Digital Artwork is created using Midjourney. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023 Shared on Twitter #amwriting @midjourney

16 responses to “21 February: RDP – Twilight”

  1. She thinks of having a smoke,
    forgetting she quit years ago,

    Love this, Misky ❤

    ~David

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  2. I have read this a number of times and I like it but I find myself moving in circles with it. It almost feels like SoC but it’s in 3rd person. It has that quality of drifting through a moment though. I am intrigued by the reference to pronouns at the beginning.

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  3. creates all sorts of pronoun
    issues she can’t understand.

    This had me laughing out loud. Good one, Misky!

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  4. I feel like I’ve lived this twilight moment.

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  5. Twilight’s the opposite of thievery, allows you to simultaneously desire light and darkness, ciggies and no ciggies; leaves you wondering about your pronouns. Me, I can never decide if he should write in 1st person or 3rd, singular or plural. I hope he can get it all figured out by sundown. We need some certainty before sunrise.

    Great stuff, M. Thanks

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  6. Brilliant piece of work Misky! 😁😁👏👏 Myself and a friend of mine were only discussing the whole landmine of pronouns and how people want to be referred to earlier today. I, like David, also enjoyed your sentence about her forgetting she quit smoking! 😛😛😂😂

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    1. It’s a minefield of wrong steps.

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  7. “creates all sorts of pronoun
    issues she can’t understand.”

    Wonderful work on poem and art!

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  8. Shadows of light and memory are good at playing tricks.
    Quite enjoyable. We like to just take time to daydream… even if the color is offputting.
    Only one of my children had a bit of jaundice… We think scary, but it is quite normal.

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    1. A lot of newborns have a bit of jaundice. Nothing to worry about – it sorts itself. Sometimes a bit of sunshine will sort it, too.

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      1. Indeed… The one with the jaundice over 35! 😉

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  9. Wonderful work on poem and art! I hope he can get it all figured out by sundown. We need some certainty before sunrise.

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