4 September: Let the Clouds In

Let the Clouds In     (working version)

I. 
Sticky 
air and 
pinprick rain on 
my arms. Open the 
window, and let the clouds 
in. 

II. 
Sticky air 
and pinprick rain. 

Open the windows, 
and let the clouds in. 

Poem form: 16 words (1.2.3.4.5.1) and couplets ©Misky 2022 Shared with #amwriting on Twitter

7 responses to “4 September: Let the Clouds In”

  1. I love reading them with different spacing, different emphasis and pondering whether I get something different out of it. I love the idea too of clouds coming in through the window like cats.

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    1. Thank you! Glad to enjoyed reading it, Jo.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. That picture just in sync with your poem too ❤️

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  3. That numbing precipitation. This has a dejavu feel to it that I enjoy.

    Like

  4. I like both together. A little bit of different perspectives. Yes, open those windows!

    Like

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