3 Sept: A Translation Poem

A stanza of a poem in Dutch
It’s Vertzil

The hills have returned 
to vertzil green. 
The clouds 
are drunk on blue. 
A kite streaks 
across the plated sky, 
its tail at war with wind. 

Original poem “Snit” by Paul Demets. I only used the first stanza in its original language, Dutch, for this poem based loosely on a translation exercise.  I read the Dutch version, not reading the English one so I wasn’t influenced by it, and listened for words that sounded similar in English. And then I created my poem based of that. In a way, I guess it’s a form of found poetry! ps: vertzil is a made up word. ©Misky 2022 Shared with #amwriting on Twitter

10 responses to “3 Sept: A Translation Poem”

  1. Yes vertzil is a very good word- upright, green and a bit zingy like sherbet on yr tongue 🙂

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    1. Yes, one of those tasty words. I chuckle, knowing that the (Dutch) source poem is all about getting a haircut.

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      1. Well now that you mention it, I’ve had a few vertzil haircuts in my time…

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  2. This is great! What a cool idea! I love the imagery in this.

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  3. You did it! I love the kite streaking across a plated sky.

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  4. This is a fascinating concept. So you can only do it with languages you don’t know, right?

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    1. Correct. 👍🏻

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  5. I was going to google it! 😁❤️

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    1. I’d be surprised if it revealed anything! 😄

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  6. I love your interpretations of the words. I esp love those ending three lines. Do you remember “Khara House” or did you ever do her prompts? She gave us a one like this. It was fun to try.

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