GloPoWriMo Day 16: A Curtal Sonnet

Spill a Cloud of Cream

This is the flower side of town.
Spring pastels to tease your eyes,
turn freezing blasts to prosper green.
We sprout from winter’s frozen ground,
into season’s route, and as months fly by
you’ll live with me, spring serene.
Stay, and I’ll read you widow’s poems.
We’ll linger long in a phantom dream,
where yes, stars fall in blueing skies,
and wild swans take freedom’s roam.
We’ll spill a cloud of cream.

(edited 17/4/22)


Written for NaPoWriMo Day 16: A Curtal Sonnet of 11-lines (abc abc dcb dc) Photo by peter bucks on Unsplash. ©Misky 2022 Shared with #amwriting #glopowrimo #napowrimo on Twitter

29 responses to “GloPoWriMo Day 16: A Curtal Sonnet”

  1. Whenever I read your poetry I feel like I come away having enjoyed gourmet cuisine.

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    1. I don’t think I’ve ever received a better compliment.

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  2. Oh, Misky, this is gorgeous! 💕🙂

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    1. Thanks, Harmony!

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  3. So lovely! Leaves me feeling so peaceful.

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  4. Sonnethanks for the invite, so beautifully proposed.
    Widow’s dreams and clouds of cream: Who could ask for more.
    Have a GREAT weekend.

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    1. Thanks, and same to you, Ron.

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  5. “spill a cloud of cream” Just beautiful description Misky!😁👌👏

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  6. Such a delicious curtal cloud of cream, Marilyn! We are currently on the flower side of town, now our cherry is flourishing.

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    1. We walked around Ashdown Forest yesterday, and the trees are hinting of green. It must be colder there than at home.

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  7. Simply beautiful. Such delicious language to linger over.

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  8. ‘stay and I’ll read you widow’s poems’
    Lovely line!

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    1. Thank you, Jane.

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  9. I adore “This is the flower side of town.” Nice assonance and such a fresh statement to open the piece.

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  10. Just lovely. I adore the last line.

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  11. That really is beautiful

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    1. Thank you, Vinny.

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