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dVerse Alliteration Assonance & Consonance

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Rivalries

Baby babbles
Feet are flying
Mama murmurs
Cooooeeee

Sister staring
Eyes are glaring
She’s Mama’s
little girl

 

for dVerse Poets. ©️ Misky 2020

Misky

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8 responses to “dVerse Alliteration Assonance & Consonance”

  1. Gina avatar
    Gina

    a wee poem packed with much love between the lines, it sang a lovely song to me

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  2. Frank Hubeny avatar
    Frank Hubeny

    Nice description with those glaring eyes.

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  3. Victoria Stuart avatar
    Victoria Stuart

    Ah, you’ve captured sibling rivalry so well. The photo is precious, too. Reminds me of my first-born smiling, kissing, and pinching his new brother, all at the same time.

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  4. hank77 avatar
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    kaykuala

    Friendly banter among the little ones can be fascinating to watch as long as they don’t hurt each other!

    Hank

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  5. Beverly Crawford avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    I see sibling rivalry in the offing! This little poem packs a wallop!

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I have just been looking through some old pictures of me and my little sister… part of that rivalry comes back to me (even boys want to be hugged)

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  7. rothpoetry avatar
    rothpoetry

    Very nice poem. Works well with the prompt!

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  8. purplepeninportland avatar
    purplepeninportland

    Perfect poem for this prompt, Misk!

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