Rivalries
Baby babbles
Feet are flying
Mama murmurs
Cooooeeee
Sister staring
Eyes are glaring
She’s Mama’s
little girl
for dVerse Poets. ©️ Misky 2020
poetry and prose
Rivalries
Baby babbles
Feet are flying
Mama murmurs
Cooooeeee
Sister staring
Eyes are glaring
She’s Mama’s
little girl
for dVerse Poets. ©️ Misky 2020
8 responses to “dVerse Alliteration Assonance & Consonance”
a wee poem packed with much love between the lines, it sang a lovely song to me
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Nice description with those glaring eyes.
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Ah, you’ve captured sibling rivalry so well. The photo is precious, too. Reminds me of my first-born smiling, kissing, and pinching his new brother, all at the same time.
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kaykuala
Friendly banter among the little ones can be fascinating to watch as long as they don’t hurt each other!
Hank
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I see sibling rivalry in the offing! This little poem packs a wallop!
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I have just been looking through some old pictures of me and my little sister… part of that rivalry comes back to me (even boys want to be hugged)
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Very nice poem. Works well with the prompt!
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Perfect poem for this prompt, Misk!
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