It's Still Life

We Brought Down the House

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image by “They All Slept Here” by Ilenia Pezzaniti. Poem written for Rattle’s Ekphrastic Challenge for September 2016, and dVerse Open Night

Misky

16 responses to “We Brought Down the House”

  1. mist twine avatar
    mist twine

    Hot, hot, hot.

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  2. kim881 avatar
    kim881

    Wow!

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  3. Brian avatar
    Brian

    Primal no-holds-barred.

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  4. lillian avatar
    lillian

    Smiling I am…..ravaged eh? Unshaven…yep. That’s true love and bringin’ the house down! 🙂

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  5. Victoria C. Slotto avatar
    Victoria C. Slotto

    Really creates a mood. Evocative.

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  6. Bodhirose avatar
    Bodhirose

    When I first read this (and saw the photo) I immediately thought of my gritty upbringing but then I read it again and see it could be a gritty couple in love and bringing down the house! There’s a lot here in those few words.

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  7. Grace avatar
    Grace

    Love the unspoken and undertones Misky ~

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  8. Tim Schaefer avatar
    Tim Schaefer

    Love gets that way–unshaven–especially when you stay the night.

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  9. hayesspencer avatar
    hayesspencer

    What fun this poem is. All I can think of is burning down the house by talking heads….watch out! 🙂

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  10. thotpurge avatar
    thotpurge

    Enjoyed that.. it is indeed a choice to be brought down by love!!

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  11. Nan Mykel avatar
    Nan Mykel

    Good memories!

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  12. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    This is passion where we let our inner beasts decide.

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  13. rosemawrites avatar
    rosemawrites

    sexy!!! 😀

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  14. petrujviljoen avatar
    petrujviljoen

    Bleak motel room scenario coupled with the choices we make. Burning the house down may have been a solution.

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  15. Walter J. Wojtanik avatar
    Walter J. Wojtanik

    Is it warm in here, or is it your poem? Quite the vignette, Marilyn!

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  16. Hank Pelaez (@kaykuala) avatar
    Hank Pelaez (@kaykuala)

    This is love unshaven!

    Yes lots of things can go wrong when one party fails to deliver

    Hank

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