This is a rough draft for dVerse: cubist/impressionist observations during a brief drive on Brighton Road this afternoon.
Northbound on Brighton Road
I.
the road is endless
until it curves away
straight on
eternal blue in clouds
II.
the line is white
centre on
straight
solid
double broken
the radio hums
III.
love, love me do
I still know every word
I hum hum solid,
broken double on
IV.
I want my life to
end happy
Love, Love Me
Do
© Misky 2016
OH, you KNOW I love those “broken hums.” Yes. YES.
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Splendid…. love the visual blended with those songs… what a great way to write to the prompt.
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I agree with the last part. I want my life to end happily also although I don’t think of the ending so much as wanting those present moments to be happy, but I’ll settle for the ending to be happy.
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You’ve got me humming along to the music and the road.
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Lovely contemplation upon the joys of nature ❤️especially love the image of ‘eternal blue in clouds’
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I was humming along with you on short drive, smiles ~ But my favorite is the first one, with the endless road & blue clouds ~
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Marvellous, Misky. The structure and words fit perfectly, and I’m humming along this morning!
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Thanks, Polly!
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Love that opening verse, Misky, and the reference to the Beatles’ song since I just saw the documentary of them by Ron Howard last weekend.
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Loved the first verse especially. Having lived through the Beatles from beginning to end, I especially enjoyed the first verse. Excellent form on this.
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Beatles! Woot! Fab job on the Fab Four Misky.
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I want my life to end happy
Love, Love Me Do
Yes, one vies and yearns it to be so all the time. The Beatles song/lyrics rings so true Misky!
Hank
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Love that added structure White space in 2 and 3 as I’m really on that two lane road with you here. Yep — and there’s nothing better when alone on the road, tto find that radio station you can sing and hum along with! Isn’t there a song that goe “on the road again…” 😊🎼
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It's Still Life 
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