The Birthday Dress
Time is beige. A sepia
moment on the run from
invisible. That’s me.
Two, maybe three.
New dress. Brown plaid.
Mum did my hair.
Ring curls.
My smile’s brighter
than sun. For Dad.
He’s the one
with the camera.
Smile, my girl.
Smile for your daddy.
written for dVerse Poets: Quadrille #13. 44 words.
Oh so wonderful! I remember my daddy with the box camera pointed at me — and then his Polaroid that he said was a magical thing as the picture started to appear before your eyes. Love this captured moment of innocence.
And love how your eyes are crinkled here!!
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(grin) … Thank you.
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I love that big smile on your face. Love that capture in time.
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😀
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Cutie to Beauty! love the portrait you painted!
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Thanks! 😀
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ah…all dads are alike; love that missing tooth smile, brighter than the sun indeed! such is the power of innocence, godly…
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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Beautiful job, Misky, catching that precious moment in time using words. Love the picture too!
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I had fun writing this one! Thank you dverse!
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
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And the colour of photo editing software too!!
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This is adorable – that wonderful sunny face! and “smile for your daddy.” Awwwwwww.
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Thank you! 😀
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So adorable! I love that enormous smile, and the way you capture the emotional memory!
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Just precious, Misky. I also grew up in the days of sepia…I love how you opened the poem with colors.
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I found this poem too cute for words.
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Thank you! Delighted you enjoyed it. 😀
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Sooooooo gorgeous! The whole thing!
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It's Still Life 
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