A Flinch
I was
smaller.
Younger.
Sharper. Like gravel.
I spoke
in consonant chords.
In song.
I was like earthquake weather
© Misky 2016. for dVerse “Sevenling” themed music
dVerse “Sevenling”
24 responses to “dVerse “Sevenling””
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I’m still like earthquake weather, Grace. To the core.
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earthquake weather.
i like how you use such short lines. when iwas writing mine, i looked back at previous submissions and really liked those that went short on the lines. its like a quick snap. i will try to work on some brevity – it does not take away the impact.
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Thought I’d try something different with this one. Works okay, I think.
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Ta. 😅
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Such wonderful short lines. I love the brevity of each. I Sometimes think as poets, we try too often to just word it to death. The reason I love the Japanese poetic forms so much. You have certainly said so much with so few words. And you are still earthquake weather! Wonderful.
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I’m glad you enjoyed reading this sevenling. They are such a delight to write.
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… and adults who refuse to grow-up!
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Oh yes… this is how it is… a sparkling quadrille… let’s keep the youth alive.
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Absolutely!
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Very effective poem in all of its brevity. I’ve spent much of my life in earthquake country. It is so unpredictable.
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I lived in Southern California for a few years, and had my teeth rattled more often than I’d wished. 🙂
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Thanks, Sumana!
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Thank you, Freya!
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Thanks, Mish. 🙂
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It's Still Life 
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