Day 13 Poem-a-Day Challenge

west Brighton pier ruins with the words Scotoma bw

A Month of Writing Negative Space Poetry

I.
The Luck of Wisdom

wisdom leans against
summer’s open door,
architecture shouldering
his weight.

birds in the pine
sing to him. that knack
of his to speak
their languages,
listen to all they say.

but from a distance
he’s silence.

he adjusts his hat,
gives himself a scratch,
and grins.

“itchy bum —
good luck to come.”


II.
Heraclitus’s River

I like to think
Heraclitus’s river
flows past his grave,

travels for miles
through landscapes
and wastelands,

over stone cliffs
into clear pools,

down to the Mediterranean,
that repository
of all rivers,

where he dreamed
luck might let him
wade.

Written for Writer’s Digest NovPAD Chapbook Challenge. ©Misky 2006-2026. Scomtoma is a partially diminished or degenerated field of vision, ie, a negative space in visual acuity. Photo: the ruins of West Pier, Brighton.

2 responses to “Day 13 Poem-a-Day Challenge”

  1. Day 13… am appropriate day for me to say a heartfelt Brava, not only for the previous entries but for those that are yet to come.

    When a poet grapples with such a theme as Scotoma is, then she is bound to encounter silence.

    It is the loneliness of the long distance runner ( amazing song by Iron Maiden, by the way).

    So, M… contrary to what it might seem, do not confuse that silence for absence of impact.

    Sometimes, the quiet explosions are the most deafening ones.

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    1. I have taken every single word of your comment to heart, and there it shall remain through the end of this month. And yes, I will now absolutely continue.

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