Day 11 Poem-a-Day Challenge

west Brighton pier ruins with the words Scotoma bw

A Month of Writing Negative Space Poetry

Gustave Courbet – Le Désespéré (1843)

An ekphrastic poem after Gustave Courbet’s Le Désespéré

The Space Between

there must be a place
between what has happened
and what happens next

where one can put
this terrible knowing.

but thought has no walls,
no door to beat against,
no window to break.

despair, to be both the hand
and the thing it cannot hold.

somewhere beyond one’s eyes,
the world goes on

without waiting.

Written for Writer’s Digest NovPAD Chapbook Challenge. Prompt: Write a portrait poem. ©Misky 2006-2026. Scomtoma is a partially diminished or degenerated field of vision, ie, a negative space in visual acuity. Photo: the ruins of West Pier, Brighton.

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