A Month of Writing Negative Space Poetry
I. Sky Game (a cinquain* poem)
past eight,
sunrise stitches
tic-tac-toe contrails,
each journey glued across blue.
a draw.
II. A Flood Knows Its Shape (a poem without form)
the river
knew its place.
rain came
without knocking.
the hills emptied
their pockets
into its throat.
it rose,
shouldered the reeds,
took the low field,
then the gate
the path
the garden
and all night
the rain kept pouring
and the river kept taking
whatever the dark could loosen.
*This is Adelaide Crapsey’s Cinquain form of five unrhymed lines with a strict 2-4-6-8-2 syllable pattern.
Written for Writer’s Digest NovPAD Chapbook Challenge. ©Misky 2006-2026. Scomtoma is a partially diminished or degenerated field of vision, ie, a negative space in visual acuity. Photo: the ruins of West Pier, Brighton.

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