Day 5 Poem-a-Day Challenge

west Brighton pier ruins with the words Scotoma bw

A Month of Writing Negative Space Poetry

Redress

I.
My last leaves turn
toward lowly light

while inside me,
I hear autumn
redressing me.

II.
you, who sit
where my reach holds earth,

what have you
not said?

III.
I watch a house
a fence a rose a crow a hose
and a ring of smoke
from your fire.

Written for Writer’s Digest NovPAD Chapbook Challenge. ©Misky 2006-2026. Scomtoma is a partially diminished or degenerated field of vision, ie, a negative space in visual acuity.

Photo: the ruins of West Pier, Brighton.

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