Day 2 Poem-a-Day Challenge

west Brighton pier ruins with the words Scotoma bw

A Month of Writing Negative Space Poetry

Prompt: (blank) More (black)

Some More, Please

fairies in the street,
pirates on the grass.

one knocking. knocking.
coal-dust cheek, grey coat
frayed into fog, flat cap,
burlap mouth.

his shoes leak
into November.

trick or
treat—

please, lady,
I want some more.

Written for Writer’s Digest NovPAD Chapbook Challenge. ©Misky 2006-2026. Scomtoma is a partially diminished or degenerated field of vision, ie, a negative space in visual acuity.

Photo: the ruins of West Pier, Brighton.

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