29.09: Dead Men Don’t Drown

Wally Dog ceramic Staffordshire dogs in the window of an English house

Dead Men Don’t Drown: #8

(catch-up with all episodes here)

Episode number 08: Dead Men Don’t Drown

That night I sleep badly, pitching from one side of the bed to the other as though the cottage has come loose from its foundations and we’d gone to sea.

At dawn I give up, pad barefoot downstairs, and put the kettle on …there’s only so much mystery a woman can endure without tea taking a formal position.

Something in the museum papers has lodged beneath my ribs β€” not a fact exactly, but the shape a fact makes when it is standing in the wrong place.

By the time the toast is cold, I have dragged my grandmother’s old shoe box of photographs onto the kitchen table and begun sorting through deckled edges, blurred summers, christenings, graves, and the merciless toothy smiles of people who knew more than they ever intended to say.

Then I find one of the cottage, dated on the back in my grandmother’s perfect hand: she is heavily pregnant in the doorway beside a smiling man with his arm easy on her shoulder, and behind them, clear as judgement in the sitting room window, the Staffordshire spaniels face inward.

The toast slips from my hand, stops marmalade-down on the floor, and all I can think is that Captain Jacob Macleod came home.

Written forΒ Denise’s Six Sentence StoryΒ including the word “stop”. Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.

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21 responses to “29.09: Dead Men Don’t Drown”

  1. Ah! He didn’t drown after all.

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    1. Maybe. Maybe not. That’s an old photo which shows her grandmother heavily pregnant, presumably with Fenella’s mum. πŸ˜‚

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  2. ooh that is a revelation πŸ™Œ

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    1. Thank you! Glad that you’re enjoying these Sixes.

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  3. depth (of story)… the most excellent of qualities (especially, imo, in a serial story)

    liked: “…the cottage has come loose from its foundations and we’d gone to sea.” totally took me back to my time at sea

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    1. Thank you! Glad that it recalled some of your days at sea.

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  4. […] Stories, and for the strange delight of having two very different narratives running side by side: Dead Men Don’t Drown and The Alcove: A Heist. One keeps pulling me toward danger, the other toward shadows, and somehow […]

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  5. why do these doggos give me the jitters… Every you write that they face inward or outward am like… Ugh… Even if a human hand put them this way… And I really wonder… What are the secrets…

    also I loved the first sentence… Imagined the feeling and it does feel like at sea….

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    1. Everyone has something that gives them the jitters. For me, it’s leaving the closet door open in the bedroom. (laughing) Glad you like that line, Reelika.

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    1. Thank you, Reya.

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      1. You’re most welcome.

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  6. Aha, an excellent development… more… please.

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    1. Absolutely. Next week. πŸ€—

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  7. The mystery deepens as seedlings of curiosity have been well planted, its taproot seeking anchor.
    Enjoying muchly, Misky!

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    1. Glad you’re enjoying it, Denise!

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  8. Or was this taken right before he left again?

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    1. (aaah’a)! (smiling)

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  9. (Just following behind in my little dingy, rope lashed the stern of dreams) πŸ’™

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    1. How lovely! ❀️

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      1. (That’s what I’m thinkin’…)

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