2209: Dead Men Don’t Drown

Wally Dog ceramic Staffordshire dogs in the window of an English house

Dead Men Don’t Drown: #7

Wally Dog ceramic Staffordshire dogs in the window of an English house

(catch-up with all episodes here)

Dead Men Don’t Drown

When I tell the volunteer that Jacob Macleod was my grandfather, her face changes by the smallest degree, not surprise exactly, but the expression of a woman who has just heard a floorboard answer back.

She does not ask whether I am sure; instead she lays out the accident report, a copy of the SOS logged at Hastings, two witness statements from the rescued deck hands, and the court-ordered nod that made my grandmother a widow a few months after the Channel took her husband without troubling to return his body.

The papers are thin, official, and faintly blue at the edges, as though the sea has already had its fingers on them.

By the time I leave the museum, Jacob Macleod has become less a drowned man than a stack of careful language: fouled nets, cargo propeller, no fault, missing presumed dead.

At dusk I take a wreath of rosemary and white roses down to the beach and throw it as far as I can into the waves, feeling foolish, solemn, and twelve years old all at once.

The tide catches it, turns it once like a thought reconsidered, and brings it straight back to the shingle at my feet.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “nod”.  Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.

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17 responses to “2209: Dead Men Don’t Drown”

  1. His ‘death’ is sounding even more mysterious- great episode 👌

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  2. “…papers are thin, official, and faintly blue at the edges, as though the sea has already had its fingers on them.”

    nice

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  3. It sounds like he might be more missing than dead.

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    1. Golly, who knows what ol’ Jacob was up to.

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  4. Ooh this is so interesting… might he be still alive? But surely no? Hmm.

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    1. I wonder if Fenella might be wondering the same!

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  5. I’m wondering if he’s still alive or not… 🤔

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    1. Hmmm 🤔 One does wonder!

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  6. It looms like the sea does not accept the offering… Hmm… And the deaths become more and more interesting… Maybe the sea knows something we don’t… Yet… Is he dead even??

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    1. I wonder what the sea is trying to tell Fenella! And I wonder if she’ll listen? Too many questions. (laughing)

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  7. Perhaps he drowned, and perhaps he simply wanted to disappear, as some have, and start anew.

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    1. He is a mystery for sure. (grinning)

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  9. “The tide catches it, turns it once like a thought reconsidered, and brings it straight back to the shingle at my feet.”

    Can’t help but wonder if Fenella was just presented with an omen.

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    1. But will she pay attention to the signs!? 🤔

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