0909: A Six – SSC&B Alcove

The Alcove: Strikethrough

two on the fence, one grey squirrel motionless, an the other — its tail a rudder steering through speed, crimped and flagging semaphores messages; a spiderweb at the window, delicate as Brugge lace, a breeze inflicting coaxing teasing a minute tremor through its lattices; autumn arrived two months early, as though woollen socks had some private grievance against summer the world had grown impatient with itself.

I enjoy revision. 

Mimi’s raisin spice Cake For Challenging Days arrives: a precise, sharp-angled cut of geometry on a plate that’s enough to make a student forgive the necessity of maths.

“Thank you, Denise,” I smile, still admiring the care taken; “Enjoy, …” she starts, then pauses, and I lift the air by saying, “Marilyn — just Marilyn.”

“What are you writing?”

My answer is in no rush: “What I see, mostly … it’s a habit of attention.”


Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link. Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “rush”.  Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

34 responses to “0909: A Six – SSC&B Alcove”

  1. Strikethrough… not an easy process,eh? But quite necessary at times.

    Btw, Mimi’s famous cake is the C4CD, Cake For Challenging Days… chef’s kiss

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    1. Ha! Perfect. One more strikethrough. Merci beaucoup! (practising) 

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  2. […] had heard that one of her favorite sixers—Misky—had found her way into the SSC&B and was doing revisions on her […]

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    1. Aaah, Reelika, you are so sweet to link back here. Thank you!

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      1. Anytime Misky! I did include you in my story, after all…

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  3. That was most interesting… great Six (plus cake, from Mimi, of course) and a chat between you and Denise.

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    1. Here’s the idea behind it, Chris, (although I’m not sure yet if I’ll keep it up) — when Clark suggested I might like an alcove, it reminded me of a friend in Australia who once a week goes to the local library, sometimes a tavern, in the early morning, same time; same day; and writes for an hour (no more and no less). Sometimes she writes, and sometimes she revises, but always she writes what she observes. I thought to myself, the SSC&B alcove is the perfect place to replicate this: once a week something worthy of 6 sentences must surely happen!

      I am glad that you found it interesting. I thought showing my process of revision might be fun, and certainly different to read.

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      1. I love that idea! You know, I used to write in our library just like that – once a week, or maybe twice that week, and about an hour each time. I guess I stopped at Covid, and I never came back. And of course, when I am here (or nearly me here), I sit to write in the Café either in a booth or an alcove! (I’ll be back about a month or two).

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        1. Oh gosh, Chris, I’m so glad to read that you’re okay with it because I was truly concerned that I not step on your (literary) toes by writing in the Café. You will always be SSC&B’s la Raconteuse.

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          1. Just laughing about that!

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  4. It felt like Grammarly crawling through the post.

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  5. I loved watching revision in progress – great write Misky 🙌

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  6. I just love-love-love this! And am so happy you are there! Hopefully I will catch a glimpse too and be able to say hello to you!

    I lived the strike throughs so much I just had to use one, sorry…

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    1. I am in France for a couple of weeks starting Saturday, but if I have time and wifi, I’ll write a Six (and maybe a little surprise!) ❤️

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      1. Are you going to Paris? We are all near Montmartre – meaning the made up people!

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        1. Oh so close and yet so far. I’m near Amiens cathedral tomorrow and Sunday, then Macon, and finally on to Montpellier. I’ll watch for you, your friends, and the gargoyles at the cathedral — SNCF has hourly trains from Paris! 🚂❤️

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          1. Oh nice! I’ve been to both Amiens and Macon several times in the past. Lovely!

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  7. France??? So fricking cool!

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    1. It’s just 35 minutes in the Channel Tunnel, and then we’re there!

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      1. Aaaaa. Hopefully we can soon go too. With our car… Here it is a bit… Further away 🤣

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  8. Nice sentence: “I enjoy revision.” I love all the strike throughs.

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    1. Thank you so much!

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  9. nothin I enjoy more than ‘real* people’** writers discussing the craft

    *well, as ‘real’ as the virtual world will tolerate lol

    **as opposed to those determined to show me the correct path

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    1. This path aims to focus on one moment during the week and force it into Denise’s constraints — notwithstanding alcove seating, Mimi’s cake, 😂 and something interesting.

      Glad you liked it, Clark.

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  10. I also have an idea for a cookie, for those who want the old time comfort of a warm cookie and cold glass of milk. I’ll perfect the recipe someday.

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    1. Oh yes! When I was a wee little thing my mum would let me have a warm cookie. I think they were called snickerdoodles. Is that right? My sister, instead of swearing, still says, Oh snickerdoodle! 😂

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    2. Oui, s’il vous plaît!

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  11. Ooh, I’d take a nibble-sized corner of that cake and slide into a booth with a cuppa black coffee. Just right for the delight of editing the day before’s rush of freewrite.

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    1. Oh you’ve given me such an interesting idea! 🤗

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  12. Dan (Steady Hands) avatar
    Dan (Steady Hands)

    Your description of the grey squirrel, its tail a rudder steering through speed, made me picture the quiet focus of a seated breath. The way you note autumn arriving two months early, as if woollen socks held a private grievance, feels both witty and oddly comforting. I loved the image of Mimi’s raisin spice Cake For Challenging Days, a precise, sharp‑angled cut of geometry on a plate that could indeed coax a student to forgive maths. The spiderweb at the window, delicate as Brugge lace, and the teasing breeze through its lattices gave the whole piece a gentle, trembling rhythm that lingered long after reading.

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    1. What a lovely comment. Thank you!

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  13. “Mimi’s raisin spice Cake For Challenging Days arrives: a precise, sharp-angled cut of geometry on a plate that’s enough to make a student forgive the necessity of maths.”

    Absolutely, love that sentence, Misky. There is excitement in strike throughs, in revisions that oftentimes don’t materialize until you’ve stumbled on the “right” set of words.

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    1. Absolutely, and that’s the fun of writing! Puzzling something visual and turning it into words.

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