2508: Six Sentence Poem

ai image of what tries to be vantablack.
for SSC&B Poetry Slam Event

They Left This morning

four bees
lay quietly
on the patio stones.

not sleeping.

the sun
had simply asked
too much of them.

I carried each one
to the shade,

where lavender
still remembers
word for word,
their names.

I’d rather believe
they’ve gone

somewhere cooler,
where foxgloves
never wilt,

and clover
keeps flowering.

somewhere
where no bee
need choose
between thirst
and sunlight.

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story Poetry Slam event on Thursday, 27 August. Including the word: Word. ©Misky 2006-2026.

29 responses to “2508: Six Sentence Poem”

  1. Are you still in a drought then? Do you remember my saucers of marbles filled with water for bees? I used to sit and watch them for ages. Giving bees water in the shade feels magical.

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    1. I’m going to do that this morning, and yes, we’re still very much under drought restrictions in SE England. The temperatures have returned to normal, for now, but the small amount of rain we had last week evaporated quickly because the air is so dry. And most worrying, well-established trees are beginning to drop branches to conserve energy.

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  2. Beeautiful requiem.
    👏

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    1. Thank you. We’re having what’s technically called, according to RHS, a false autumn. The trees are shedding all their leaves, and this morning I found that one of the trees shed an entire limb. Trees do that when they’re stressed and trying to survive.

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  3. Lovely hearing you read this Misky! ❤ Very nice!

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      1. You’re welcome 🙂

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  4. So sad, but for your kindness.

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    1. This heat and drought has proved quite concerning. Not only are there no aphids about but actually very few insects. Even the ants have gone deeper underground. I think this summer will be the turning point where balance shifted.

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      1. Hopefully they’re just waiting for life/us to settle down, and then come back. They’re tougher than we are. 🤞

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        1. When we drove back home from Denmark last month, we noticed a near complete lack of insects splattered on the front of the car. Worrying.

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          1. That is. Who ever thought lack of bug splat would be cause for concern?

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  5. Wonderfully done. Your sad poem and your lovely voice. I did enjoy that a lot.

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    1. Thank you, Chris.

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  6. I like how lavender remembers their names. Beautifully read and beautiful poem.

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    1. Ahhh, thank you so very much, Frank.

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  7. […] 9. Thankful for all the work she did this summer, pollinating, and starting the cycle of creating food for us to eat. Four red-tailed bumblebees died that day. The heat was too much for them. I wrote a poem for her.  […]

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  8. Beautiful poem and well read.

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    1. Thank you so very much, Reelika.

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  9. A sadly beautiful poem, Misky, the reading of it making it more so.

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    1. Thank you, Denise.

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  10. My heart grieves for the plants and animals which suffer so much in these conditions. This is a beautifully written poem and I’m glad you are going to put out a dish of water.

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    1. Thank you, Mimi. We had a bit of rain this weekend, and already the plants look less stressed.

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