2508: Protesting Quadrilles

Two Protesting Quadrilles

I.
she is one among a hundred
sandaled feet,
leather slapping
late-August streets.

heat rises
to regimented metre,
chanting voices,
summer-tanned skin.

the street becomes
a wilderness of protest,
placards ticking,
senses wired
to explosion.

police draw a line.
skin presses skin.

panic
crosses it.


II.
she came with sandals,
August skin,
a placard.
nothing more.

then protest found
its marching metre:

slap of leather,
chant and answer,
heat rising
from a hundred bodies.

police locked arms.
the crowd moved closer.

somewhere between
breath and breath,

fear
set in.



Written for dVerse Poets Quadrille #354 “Protest”. Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is my own work.© Misky 2006-2026.

21 responses to “2508: Protesting Quadrilles”

  1. I love a two for one, Marilyn, and your protesting quadrilles are stunning, especially the use of sound in the first, the leather slapping, the chanting voices and the placards ticking. The second seems more peaceful.

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    1. Thank you, Kim. I *tried* to internalise the second viewpoint psychologically, whereas the first is externalised and more physical. Glad you liked it.

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      1. My pleasure, Marilyn.

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  2. I can imagine the scene! So vividly! ❤

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    1. Thank you, Carol Anne.

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  3. Been there, done that. You have absolutely captured it! I feel myself tense as I read.

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    1. Thanks, Rosemary, Been there and done that myself.

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  4. Well done! A good flashback to the Creedance Song.

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    1. Thank you! Far too long since I heard that song.

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  5. These alternative viewpoints are fascinating – thank you for the two poems!

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  6. Love the different viewpoints…

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  7. Two interesting points of view. I favored the second.

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    1. Lovely. Thanks!

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  8. Love that you gave us two Q for the price of one. Similar vocabulary but the different juxtaposition of words presents two contrasting viewpoints. Brilliant!

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  9. There’s a humility in those opening lines that adds power to the nature of protest, the humble, ordinary, sandalled folk.

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    1. Thank you, Paul.

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      1. Very welcome Misky ❤️

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