0408: Dead Men Don’t Drown

Wally Dog ceramic Staffordshire dogs in the window of an English house

Dead Men Don’t Drown

Episode 1

Two ceramic Staffordshire spaniels on my grandmother’s windowsill spent my childhood combing the sea beyond the harbour wall, their glazed eyes fixed beyond a window etched white by salt; one would think they expected the tide to bring somebody back.

The sea never stayed outside, its salt creeping into the hinges, the window frames, the hems of curtains, but it never dulled the patient glaze in those two dogs’ eyes, nor persuaded them to look anywhere else.

My grandfather, Jacob Macleod, disappeared before I was born when his trawler’s nets fouled the propeller of a passing cargo ship; the sea surrendered two deck hands to the Coast Guard, but kept Jacob for itself.

An SOS reached the shore, a magistrate’s ink called it an accident, and after twelve months my grandmother’s widowhood was folded into a neat envelope of official paper; paper has always been better at closing files than noticing what slips between them.

Nobody in the family questioned any of it, because grief has a way of salting a story if you leave it long enough.

It was only years later, standing alone in that room after my grandmother’s funeral, that I began to wonder whether those dogs had been waiting for Jacob Macleod’s return at all, or making certain he never crossed the threshold again.

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “slip”.  Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

30 responses to “0408: Dead Men Don’t Drown”

  1. Ah, that’s where your ink goes…
    Unseen footsteps on the floor,
    Close the window, bar the door.

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    1. Aye, but that old salt always finds a way in. Ty, AO.

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  2.  “…because grief has a way of salting a story if you leave it long enough.”

    subtle and powerful.

    damn!

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    1. Thank you, and welcome to a new series with new characters!

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  3. A nice touch of mystery, M… what are those dogs guarding?

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    1. Thank you! More next week, Tom.

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  4. Dammit! Clark already said what I was going to, lol. (it is a fantastic line)

    And so the ride begins, Misky. Intrigue along the coast (where I am most at home), mystery and no doubt a bit of drama on the high seas. So looking forward to this new series.

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    1. (big smile) Thank you so much, Denise, and thank you for hosting every week. I have so much fun slipping out of my poet’s shoes once a week.

      One thing I’ve never been sure of, Denise: Can the weekly word be used in any form/tense?

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      1. It truly is my pleasure, Misky. I’m quite glad you slip out of those shoes once a week to write at the Six, a sentiment shared by many others.

        Thank you, I appreciate you asking. It has been my intention in recent years the prompt word be used in its original form, adding to the challenge to write stories in exactly 6 sentences. Having said that, yes, changing the tense of the word is acceptable. Unacceptable is bolding the prompt word within a different word. For example, “altercation”. That defeats the challenge and fun of the SSS challenge.  

        Hope you are enjoying your weekend!   

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        1. Thank you for the clarification. I’ll certainly try my best to keep the prompt word in its original form.

          Wishing you a lovely relaxed weekend.

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  5. I love the start of this new story Misky – it has the feel of a thriller about it 🙌

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    1. Thank you so much! Not sure if it’s a thriller, but a mystery to be solved (or not!) for sure.

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  6. Fabulous scene-setting, Marilyn, and, having lived right by the sea for five years, I know how sea salt creeps into almost everything. The final paragraph has me begging for more!

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    1. Thank you, Kim! I hope you’re enjoying your birthday week.

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      1. My pleasure, Marilyn. We’re off to Hastings first, then on Sunday we’re going to get the ferry from Portsmouth to the Isle of Wight and I’ll have all day Monday with my sister!

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  7. I know this is going to be wonderful… I love series! Also, that song was great too. (smiling)

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    1. I am so happy to know this, and I hope that you enjoy this new one, Chris.

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  8. You write so well!

    I loved the ending!

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    1. That is lovely to hear, and thank you very much.

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  9. Sometimes you want them back and yet you don’t.

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    1. Oh, there’s more to old Jacob than meets the eye, Mimi.

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  10. Nice ending. It makes me wonder what actually happened to Jacob Macleod.

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    1. Indeed, and hopefully Fenella will figure it out!

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  11. And so with the history, and stories we tell, comes a powerful single note that is The Truth’s Tell. Oh, that final sentence!

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    1. Aye. That wee crack that trips us up.
      Thank you, Liz!

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  12. The last line is intriguing.

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  13. The last line seems very intriguing.

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    1. Good, that’s the idea so I succeeded! 😂

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