0507: Six Sentence Poem

lightning night sky

Two Six Sentence Poems: Thunder

I. Thunder

Thunder wilts through July’s green oak.
Distance beyond distance.
Sun-bleached blue.
We renamed the cloudless sky Thunder.
Its heat soaked into the flagstones.
Then again, it rumbled —
the long arm from a constellation.

II. Thunder

Cloudless all afternoon.
Thunder somewhere beyond the hills.

The flagstones giving back
everything the sun had taken.

But no storm arrived.

The stars arrived early,
and we had renamed
the sky.

I still think of constellations
as weather
that forgot its name.

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story (or sometimes it’s a poem), including the word: Thunder. Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

9 responses to “0507: Six Sentence Poem”

  1. love them both ❤ ❤

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  2. May there be some cooling rain–no, a cloudburst–in your near future!

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    1. We’re in the midst of another heatwave. Just hit 31°c.

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      1. So I hear…😓

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  3. This poem reminded me of heat lightening in the sky at night in the summer when we slept outside on a blanket in the yard……. I have never seen it again- anywhere.

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    1. Anything that embeds such a long term memory must’ve been amazing.

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  4. Loved both of those poems. So elegant…

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    1. Thank you, Chris.

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