0407: Violet’s Phraseology

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A Persistent Syllable

not overnight,
not immediate,
gradual,
like a shadow’s slow wrap around a flagpole,
like the tap’s persistent syllable
counting out moments.

No more today, she says,
and closes her book,
as if a page holds a boundary
against the drip,
the drift,
the soft unravel
of sight.

Would you mind, love,
chopping the onions?
I don’t think
I should.

All the words we hear.
All the sounds we see.
All the light we cannot see
gathers in
the visible lift of a finch’s wing,
in a note we almost catch
with the corner of the ear,

in a robin’s stitch of song,
a magpie’s sharp ink,
a sparrow’s hymn.

And the tap drips on,
a small, flawed bell
ringing time.


Written for Violet’s Phraseology, including Anthony Doerr’s All the Light We Cannot See . Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is my own work.©Misky 2006-2026.

12 responses to “0407: Violet’s Phraseology”

  1. I love the similes ‘like a shadow’s slow wrap around a flagpole’ and ‘like the tap’s persistent syllable counting out moments’, Marilyn, and the thought of light gathering in the ‘visible lift of a finch’s wing’.

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    1. I’m so glad you liked this one. Thank you!

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      1. You’re welcome, Marilyn!

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  2. You have the true heart of a poet. What you have created here is so entwined with the quote and yet dances around it in perfect time. Brilliant.

    Thank you so much for joining me again this week.

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    1. What a joy to read that comment, Violet. Thank you.

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  3. So very clever – just fab!

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    1. Big smile … thank you! 🙏

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  4. Heavy in atmosphere, as the steady drip keeps moving

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    1. Thank you, Liz. I had lots of fun with this one.

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  5. gorgeous write, xox 🤗🤗

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    1. Thank you so much!

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