1606: Brigid’s Diary – A Six

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Part 13, Brigid’s Diary: The Abbey of Saint-Roman

Beaucaire, July 1836, Camouflage

The Beaucaire Fair moved like the Rhône in flood, bodies and bargains braiding into one slow current, and Felreil folding his foreignness into the merchants’ black coats and polished leather while quick fingers rehearsed their small rebellions at the height of a purse.

Poverty showed through the noise like bone through skin: wrists too narrow for cuffs, mouths tightened against hunger that does not consult the calendar.

There were no rooms to be bought, so we climbed into the troglodyte ribs of Saint-Roman Abbey, stone worn down to vertebrae, a shelter so stripped it felt like confession.

A shepherd boy, all dust and tendon, welcomed us to his fire and thin broth as if generosity were muscle memory learned from a different time.

Felreil drew a pamphlet from his coat and, when the boy mistook it for a story, began in that dry cadence of his: “The absolute rights can be reduced to three: security, liberty, property” —and the word rights entered the child’s face like weather, widening it, as though it might mean bread, or a winter that did not return.

While he read, I turned the boy’s hands in mine, cracked skin opening like small red maps, vinegar to sting, thyme to follow, green salve of rosemary and beeswax pressed into linen, and I wondered which of those three rights was meant to cover this child’s hands.


Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link. Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “dust” Images created with Midjourney; all writing is my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

29 responses to “1606: Brigid’s Diary – A Six”

  1. ISS
    Ink. Soundtrack. Superb.

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    1. 🥰 Thank you. I’m pleased with this one.

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  2. A magnificent, touching text, a wonderful image (that seems so familiar), and glorious music! I feel spoiled 🙂 Thank you, Marilyn, enjoy a relaxed day!

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    1. Spent the day walking on Beachy Head and then fish and chips in Eastbourne. Such a lovely summer day.

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  3. Pulls me right in! Brilliant!

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    1. Thank you, Violet! Glad you enjoyed reading it.

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  4. Beautiful moment, in both word and deed!

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    1. Thank you, Liz.

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  5. These stories always leave me wanting to cry.

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    1. Aaaah, no Mimi. No tears, please.

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  6. Poverty showed through the noise like bone through skin…” very evocative wordage.

    Good Six, excellent continuation of the journey

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    1. Thank you, Clark. Glad you enjoyed it.

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  7. May there be plenty of bread for all of them. Nice video with that amazing instrument.

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    1. It is amazing, isn’t it?! How ever he plays it, I’ll never know.

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  8. I love how even when the story is hauntingly painful you have written it in a way it’s also hauntingly beautiful.

    I love these “diaries”, and I love the way you tell those stories. Seriously.

    Can’t wait for the next installment,

    while they do shake up some type of an emotion in me I am also always at awe at how your sentences almost like soften it because they are so darn pretty lol.

    I don’t know if it made sense but…

    Love your sixes!

    All of ’em!

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    1. That makes me very happy, Reelika. I reckon (possibly) there are 3 more episodes in this series, and then I’m off for 3 weeks to Denmark to be with family. This series started 4 months ago — that’s a long haul of continued instalments. (grinning) But I am truly delighted that you’ve enjoyed reading them. Thank you.

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      1. oh my, it’s ending??? 😭😭. But hopefully Denmark will be great .

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        1. But that means a new series!! As for Denmark, I’ll have lots to be thankful for ❤️

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          1. ooh, a new series 🤔🤔🤔🤔

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  9. Oh wow, that Abbey of Saint-Roman. What an interesting place – I just looked in Google. Also, that wonderful instrument!

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    1. The old abbey is an amazing place. There are also some extraordinary troglodyte homes in the Loire Valley. On the day we visited, it was blisteringly hot, but inside it was cool and lovely.

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  10. Hard to say more or better than the above readers. You have a beautifully rendered story.

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    1. Thank you so much!

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  11. So touching Misky and the accompanying music is just superb 🙌

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    1. Thank you so very much!

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  12. Vivid descriptions in this episode.

    That 14 strings guitar is spectacular. Some musicians practiced on those guitars prior to achieving greatness.

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    1. It’s an amazing instrument!

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  13. oh man that’s a tough read…. a wee bit of reality that never changes just a different scenario of time… loved the details that brought clear images to my mind and gave 6SS strength…. a lone child with a steady meal of starvation just enough broth to keep death away from his door brings a sigh of sorrow… loved the salve a wonderful kind gesture bringing compassion to the stone surroundings…. nice one Misky

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