It's Still Life

1306: Journal of SenHai

baby elephant playing in the mud

Senryu
the puddle wins out
every grand adventure starts
with dirty feet

Haiku
young elephant plays
every puddle is certain
it is an ocean

Written for Susi’s SenHai Saturday #56  ©Misky 2006-2026.

Misky

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16 responses to “1306: Journal of SenHai”

  1. Sadje/ Sadie avatar
    Sadje/ Sadie

    Very nicely done Misky

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you. ❤️

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      1. Sadje/ Sadie avatar
        Sadje/ Sadie

        You’re most welcome

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    Violet Lentz

    What a perfect song! I love everything about this!

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      Misky

      Thank you. So glad that you enjoyed the song. So sweet.

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    pedometergeek

    Nicely done, and both are charming. ~Nan

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      Misky

      Thank you, Nan!

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    poetisatinta

    love this pair so cute and great song too ❤️

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      Misky

      Thank you very much!

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    Chris Hall

    Aww, how lovely… so sweet both! 🐘 and, of course, that great song.

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      Misky

      Thank you, Chris! ❤️

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    clark

    ‘specially enjoyed the haiku

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      Misky

      Thank you!

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  7. Susi Bocks avatar
    Susi Bocks

    Spot on, Misky! Loved them, brought back a feeling of energy we experience in our youth. ❤

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you, and thanks for the image.

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        Susi Bocks

        My pleasure, you’re welcome, Misky!

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