0906: Brigid’s Diary – A Six

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Brigid’s Diary: Part 12.2, Arles, Spring 1836

Under the Floorboard

The shouting started next door: boots on stairs, a man’s voice like a stomp, the scrape of furniture across wood, and the thin-pitched sound of children when they learn the house is not theirs.

I tasted blood where I’d bitten my lip without noticing, salt and iron, and my hands found the What Is Property pamphlets as if paper could grow hot with fear.

Felreil stood by the door and listened the way a blade listens …still, and exact — while the walls carried every plea and every blow as clearly as prayer.

I did not burn the pages, because fire is too final and rebellion survives by passing from hand to hand, and I have always known that when difference is named out loud, concealment becomes the only option.

When the knock came closer to our stairwell, to our landing — I slid the contraband pamphlets into the dark beneath a loose board, dust rising like old breath, and set the rug back as carefully as if I were laying a baby to sleep.

If this diary is found, know this: the police searched for foreigners first, and I hid the truth where footsteps could not see it.


Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link. Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “option“. Images created with Midjourney; all writing is my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

22 responses to “0906: Brigid’s Diary – A Six”

  1. And the story keeps repeating…
    A formidable unearthed episode-in-amber, Marilyn.

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    1. Thank you, N. Perhaps a lighter tone next week.

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  2. So much tension in this installment!

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    1. Yes, sometimes I get carried away. (grinning) Less tense next week, I think.

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  3. On seat’s edge, Misky, and I love being there. Very nice touch with the music backdrop – delicate dreaminess in contrast to the tension of your Six.

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    1. You’ll be able to relax a bit next week. Popcorn will be safe on your lap and won’t topple over the sofa. Thanks again for the prompt word.

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  4. This episode is nail biting – and great track too 🙌

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    1. Thank you so much!

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  5. what they said

    (nice touch, somehow conscripting details of the scene in service of the building narrative tension)

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    1. Thank you, Clark!

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  6. It’s always good to have the loose floorboard and a rug.

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    1. Always, and the rug is good cover. (pun intended)

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  7. This is getting more scary…

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    1. Says the woman who has gargoyles for traveling companions. 😂 I’ll make you some tea…

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  8. From all the remarques books and some others that I have read and all the stories my gran-gran told me it was exacly like that…

    Many of your stories that I have read in the past weeks feel as if written by a person who lived these things at this time. Like a real diary, and that’s what I love about them…

    i personally loved the tension.

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    1. Thank you, Reelika, for that lovely observation and comment.

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      1. you are more than welcome .

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  9. Good point: “when difference is named out loud, concealment becomes the only option”

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  10. the rising of revolution…. the sounds the thoughts… enjoyed your thursday six….

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    1. Thank you so much!

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