25 May: Journal of Thoughts

photo of a little girl looking the window of a train.

Train Window Poems (a stream of consciousness poem)

Four, I suppose.

Curly hair,
dark as loam.

‘for mange gamle mennesker’,
he says to his mother.

Too many old people.

She kisses the top of his head.

He has no idea
I speak Danish too.

I smile.
Wink.

He stares.

What does a child think
when his assumptions fail?

May yours stay fluid,
little one —
be water
finding its way through stone.

Wind whips the leaves.

It reminds me of Sweden.

Summers.
A wraparound porch.
Fresh bread.
Warm pine.

Two wooden paddles,
grooved.
Painted hearts and blossoms.

I pressed water
from churned butter.

That was my job
as a child.

Play
was my other job.

I took both seriously.

Lilacs grow like weeds here,

between rail tracks,
through tarmac,

purple,
white.

Butterflies
on the third rail.

They flit,
fluttering
on 750 volts.

Letting the days go by —

same as it ever was.


Written for Linda’s Stream of Consciousness “may you” . This is my own photo, which I out-painted for a 16:9 aspect using Midjourney. All writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

10 responses to “25 May: Journal of Thoughts”

  1. I would bring out my phone and pretend to have a call. In Danish.

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    1. I used to do this when salesmen came to the door — I’d only speak Danish. They quickly put me on their “forget about it” list. Nowadays, I don’t bother opening the door.

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  2. I am lost in translation between the verse and the song!

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    1. Does that mean that you don’t understand it? Just so I’m clear?

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      1. See I allow myself to get blindsided by trying to figure out the tie in between your words and the song and totally missed that last line.

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        1. The song was probably not the best choice on my part. I just happen to like that song, and it was on my playlist at the time. I’m not a country music fan particularly, but I do like that one.

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  3. No, I wanna know what the tie in was

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    1. My steam of consciousnesses are rather untied. That song was playing on Spotify when I was traveling home on the train — and I’ve always liked it.

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    1. Thank you, Chris.

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