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23 May: Journal of SenHai

Unreasonable Arguments

Senryu
storm after storm
the sea still convinced
the rocks will apologise

Haiku
waves split on black stone
even the storm pauses
before those pillars

Written for SenHai Saturday. Image by Andrei R. Popescu on Unsplash. ©Misky 2006-2026.

Misky

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12 responses to “23 May: Journal of SenHai”

  1. poetisatinta avatar
    poetisatinta

    Wonderful pair 🙌

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      Misky

      Thank you so much!

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        poetisatinta

        🩷

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  2. Susi Bocks avatar
    Susi Bocks

    They’ll be waiting for that apology forever! 🙂 Loved them, Misky!

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      I think you’re right, Susi. Thanks for image this week.

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        Susi Bocks

        You’re welcome!

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    gdutta17

    Loved both the compositions. The first one, though, certainly deserves special applause. It’s beautiful-both in terms of the thought as well as expression. Loved it. 👏👏👏

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      Misky

      Thank you so very much!

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        gdutta17

        You are most welcome 🙏🏻 😊

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  4. Eugi avatar
    Eugi

    Both stunning verses, Misky.

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      Misky

      Thank you!

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        Eugi

        You’re welcome.

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