19 May: Six Sentence Story

burning barn in field of harvested hay with shadowy figures fleeing the scene on the left of the image

An Undated Note Inserted in Brigid’s Diary

Part 11.1, Avignon

If this diary is ever found, know first that we did not leave England lightly; we gave it our backs, our hands, our winters, and still it asked for more …more hunger, more silence, more gratitude for wages that would not keep bread before a child, nor steam in the pot.

When the threshing machines came, they came not as progress but as theft of humanity, swallowing the autumn work by which labouring families had always carried themselves through to spring.

So we broke the machines, and some burned barns, and I was among them — not from wildness, never that — but because starvation had already entered the cottages and stood there like a magistrate counting ribs.

In Sussex the cry rose for bread, for fair wages, for a few shillings more each day that might keep life in the body, yet the newspapers named it war, as though the poor refusing to starve were guilty of sedition.

Then came the arrests, the gaols, the lesson made public: leaders condemned, two sent to the gallows, until every fire we had lit seemed to cast its light forward onto a noose.

Felreil said we must leave before England made an example of me as well, and so we crossed the water with smoke still in our clothes and fear at our heels — if justice lived there, it had chosen the landlords’ table over ours.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “steam”.  Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

21 responses to “19 May: Six Sentence Story”

  1. A most profound distillation of your Liturgy that gives more depth to Brigid.

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    1. Thank you, N. Avignon next week!!

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  2. This reminds me so much of Ken Follett’s The Armor and the Light! We are about to undergo a technical revolution to rival the industrial revolution me thinks…

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    1. I agree that a revolution is going to bring about a lot of change in the future, and I’m not sure that any government is preparing the workforce for the joblessness it will create in the next decade. Amazon is already reducing their workforce in exchange for more profit. This is the same root cause of most rebellion and riots.

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  3. Beautifully written. Yes, it was for a time long ago. Yet, as I read it, in some aspects it can almost read as present times, due to some of the constraints some people and countries feel right now. It’s unfortunate.

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    1. It does read as present times, Angela, which makes it all the more alarming. We twist and turn, but never change. Thank you for your insight.

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  4. Nice description: “as though the poor refusing to starve were guilty of sedition” I can see why the characters of this tale left.

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    1. Aye, Frank. Rob from the poor to give to the rich.

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  5. This is so good, It’s as if am there myself experiencing the thoughts.

    I completely understand why they left and what made them to…

    I would have done the same.

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    1. Thank you, Reelika. I’m really very pleased to know that it feels that way for you — my aim, complete.

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  6. An excellent distillation of the earlier full explanation. Wonderful writing, as always, Misky!

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    1. Thank you so much, Chris. That lovely compliment made me smile.

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  7. happened to have watched a ‘cast yesterday about effects of technological progress on horses and humans

    except rather than focus on the automobile and the demise of (the use of) horses it was AI and… pretty much everything we do (lol)

    very poignant, if not cautionary Six i.e. if justice lived there, it had chosen the landlords’ table over ours.

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    1. AI transition is here in Europe. Employers aren’t hiring for entry level positions where AI can be used at a fraction of the (monetary) cost, and corporations like Amazon and eBay are laying off people and replacing them with AI. And I doubt that governments are making provision for the drop in tax revenue or the rise in unemployment .

      This whole series is about transition, how we react to it, and the resulting mass movement of population seeking employment, so I’m pleased that these Sixes made that connection for you.

      Thanks, Clark.

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  8. […] For Denise’s Six Sentence Stories and the Liturgy-style mind-mapping I write to create the weekly […]

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  9. It is ever thus. In a comment you say, “We twist and turn, but never change,” and you are right, human nature doesn’t change, only the technology.

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    1. Yes, Mimi. The floor beneath our feet forever in motion, like one of those carnival undulating walkways.

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  10. A cautionary tale indeed – great write as always Misky 🙌

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  11. Progress is not progress if does not value and raise up all of the people, and the world we love. Get their attention, burn it down!

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  12. In the poetry of struggle, Brigid voices man’s proclivity for subjugating those of the lesser among them.  I do so enjoy your writing, Misky.

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    1. Thank you, Denise. 🙏 Her voice speaks from the heart of my ink (and I’m thinking that next week — Felreil will show his hand).

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