19 May: dVerse Ekphrastics

Bride with a Fan

She is made of hush —
blue air, white petals,
a face turned inward
as though listening
for the vow before it is spoken.

The veil does not hide her;
it teaches light to soften.
Even her silence seems painted
with a tremor of winter sky.

In her hand, the fan opens
like a small, private weather,
something between a flower
and a folded wing.

She stands at the edge of becoming:
not sorrowful,
not glad,
but entirely
a breath held inside blue.


Written for dVerse Poets Marc Chagall, Bride with a Fan (1911) ekphrastic poetry.  Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

28 responses to “19 May: dVerse Ekphrastics”

  1. A breath held inside blue. – Lovely.

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    Renata Hartsong

    Very nice indeed…blue is my fave color, any hue.

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        Renata Hartsong

        You’re welcome.

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  3. It is impossible to pick a favorite line. I love them all. A wonderful poem.

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    1. Thank you. Think of them as children; we never choose favourites.

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  4. What beautiful imagery and exploration of blue – in colour and thought – Jae

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    1. Thank you so much, Jae.

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  5. A gorgeous ekphrastic poem, Marilyn. I love the opening line, the fan opening ‘like a small, private weather’ and that the bride ‘stands at the edge of becoming… a breath held inside blue’.

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    1. Thank you so much, Kim. I do so love writing ekphrastic poetry — it’s been a while. Hope you are well, and enjoying spring.

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      1. You’re most welcome, Marilyn. I’ve just had a steroid injection in my arthritic left hand, so hope my typing will improve again!

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        1. In a word, ouch! 🤗

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  6. Gorgeous literary vision.

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    1. Thank you so much!

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  7. Your descriptive poetic response to the art is stunning! I see the bride in a softer light now.

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  8. I love how you described the bride, it is if we got a glimpse of her inner being (all blue), maybe her marriage is not a happy one.

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    1. I think we should assume she’s happy. 😊

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  9. This poem has some fun, surprising imagery. I especially enjoyed the veil that teaches light to soften, and the fan fan like small, private weather. Very nice.

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  10. Very well crafted and evoked. (I know I shouldn’t pick fave lines per your conversation above But…my favorite stanza “In her hand, the fan opens
    like a small, private weather,
    something between a flower
    and a folded wing.”

    Love love that metaphor!! it encapsulates the poem (and femininity) perfectly!

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    1. I’m delighted that you enjoyed that line, thank you.

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  11. Beautiful imagery Misky too many brilliant lines to pick one standout one 💙

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    1. I’m so pleased that you found the whole it enjoyable to read. Thank you so much.

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  12. Very lovely… blue and blue. Nice colour!

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    1. Blue is truly such an interesting colour — it can be warm and cool; it just needs words to change its temperament.

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