2403: Six Sentence Story

etching of Lyon the Saône and the Rhône rivers. Creative Commons image

Presqu’île: Where the Rivers Decide

Brigid’s Diary, Episode 05: March 1834

Presqu’île narrowed beneath our feet like a blade, and the city balanced on it; north behind us, south ahead — and my thoughts still full of noises that would not stop.

At the waterline a pale seam of silt and foam kept writing and rewriting the boundary, and I realised revolt does not end when the streets fall quiet; it simply changes where it lives.

“Is it always like this,” I asked, meaning more than water, and Felreil said, “Only where decisions pretend to be gentle.”

Behind us Lyon kept speaking; bells, feet, the distant labour of men, but the Rhône refused to look back.

“South,” he said, not as hope but as method; “South it is,” I agreed, because some currents ask and answer only once, and March waits for no one.

If a place can teach you how to leave without being chased, then this is where our journey stops being flight and becomes direction.


Note: presqu’île – french, peninsula


Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link, and use this line for the Liturgy/mindmapping posts.

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “march”.  Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

29 responses to “2403: Six Sentence Story”

  1. A cinematic scene achieved with internal breaths… brava, Marilyn.

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  2. I was anxious to see how you crafted this after having read the liturgy- the feel is totally different but very satisfying.

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    1. I’m delighted that you felt so — thank you very much!

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  3. i love how direction has no guide but how the river flows…. i enjoyed the depth of the river

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    1. Thank you so much!

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  4. I read it four times, it’s satisfying in a way that it pulls you in and you feel like you are there. I especially loved the last sentence, read it over and over again. I may become a fan like this.

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    1. Such a lovely comment to read, Reelika. Thank you every so much.

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  5. just as enchanting as always ~

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    1. Thank you, Mysteriam. ❤️

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  6. Onward then… to Provence, perhaps?

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    1. Possibly! But things take longer in the 1800s. Horses and boats — and such.

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  7. Marchons, les gens🙌 Great visuals ♥️

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    1. Slowly but surely! And thank you so much.

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  8. What fun! In that irresistible fount of information that is the internet… looked up Presqu’île lol the fun we had adding reality to the daydream of your Six

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    1. I’ve stood on Lyon’s presqu’île. It’s quite remarkable to see these two major rivers mix together. It’s like at Skagen in Denmark where the Baltic Sea meets the North Sea — an unbelievable undercurrent that even ships struggle to navigate.

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  9. So beautiful! The visions your words produce are quite phenomenal.

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    1. Thank you, Angela. I’m delighted to know that you enjoyed reading this week’s Six Sentence Story.

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  10. What a blessing when the journey becomes direction, not flight.

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    1. There are a great many people nowadays who know that feeling; immigrants, refugees, all hoping for safety and a better life.

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  11. Captivating episode, Misky. The flow of your words calm, they belie the riptides below the surface.

    Sentence 2 “hit me” on first reading and like Reelika, I read it multiple times. Last sentence – total power ending.

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    1. Thank you, Denise. And thanks for the excellent prompt word; everything just fell into place.

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  12. I’m especially enamored by the 2nd sentence…”a pale seam of silt and foam kept writing and rewriting the boundary”.

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    1. Thank you so much, Cale. Glad you enjoyed that line.

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  14. Nice description of a journey’s transition from flight to direction.

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    1. Thank you so much, Frank.

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