1603: Six Sentence Story

single line drawing of the outline of Lyon France B&W ink on paper

Brigid’s Diary, 1834, What the River Knows

Episode III – Lyon, The Confluence

At the meeting of the Saône and the Rhône rivers, the surface agreed while the bodies argued, currents swinging between quarrel and agreement, each teaching the other a deeper way to move. It spoke without lifting its voice, smooth as glass where the lamps touched it, and unanswerable underneath.

I watched leaves travel together until the seam took them, and saw how easily calm swings to direction.

Felreil stood with me and said nothing.

The bells from Cathédrale Saint-Jean-Baptiste de Lyon counted the hour, and the mosquitoes stitched their wire-song through it, as if reminding us that patience is also a force.

If a time can look this calm and still mean to take you under, then we will travel as water does —reading the pull, yielding early, and never mistaking the surface for mercy.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “swing”. Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

29 responses to “1603: Six Sentence Story”

  1. This makes me think about our own river The Chena- we lose people in her every year as they take the seemingly ambling water for somewhere to take a dip- but underneath her waters are raging ang carry them away- most never to be located.

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    1. The Thames is like that. Smooth on the surface and a conveyor belt underneath. And if you don’t drown, the pollution will kill you in a few days.

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  2. Good reminder in these uncertain times; be careful of the battles we choose lest we find ourselves in a war we cannot win.

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    1. Wouldn’t it be grand if the ones causing these conflicts heard you?

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  3. What a stunning piece of prose. It captures the ‘heavy’ atmospheric tension, where the silence between two people is louder than the city around them 🙌

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    1. Thank you very much. I’m glad you enjoyed reading this week’s instalment.

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  4. A fabulous six. The Mighty Mississippi is this way, too. Old Man River is very unforgiving.

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    1. Ah yes, the Mississippi. I’d hoped at one time to see that river but I doubt it’ll ever happen now. I’ve seen the source of the Thames, and also the Seine River, and to my mind there’s something very memorable about seeing where something begins.

      Thank you for your lovely comment.

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  5. Very, very vivid, and very good too. An excellent Six.

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    1. Thank you! I so pleased that you enjoyed reading it.

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  6. One of the things I find fascinating in Brigid’s diary is that it touches on the unseen strings of such events. Usually we get a historic account, or a photographic narration that nevertheless maintains focus at the sum of unfolding events … but almost never the extend of internal disfigurement that creeps in.

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    1. A comment I truly appreciate. The ‘internal disfigurement’ — yes, drawing on (what some call) a collective memory — what I call Anima Mundi.

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  7. Nice phrases: “the mosquitoes stitched their wire-song” and “mistaking the surface for mercy”

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    1. Thanks, Frank. Glad you liked those two.

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  8. the ‘mistaking the surface for mercy’ resonates for me in terms of our location’s primary manifestation of water, the ocean.

    While currents are less obvious (to those semi-aquatic visitors to the beach), undertow is surely the troll under the bridge

    fricken symphony of words, yo

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    1. And fricken thank you from the pointy end of my pencil!

      ps: most people don’t recognise that v-shaped wave breaking away from the shore. Sure sign of a rip tide.

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  9. Once again I’m so fascinated by your writing–the first sentence is my fave.

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    1. Thank you so very much, Cale. By the way, how do you pronounce your name? I’m quite sure that I mispronounce it in my head.

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      1. Well, since it’s a pseudonym it really doesn’t matter how you pronounce it😊 I should just use my real name–Leslie (pronounced with the S, not a Z). I might put up an ABOUT page…sooner or later. Thanks for your interest, Misky! Have a blessed weekend.

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        1. Leslie. Such a lovely name.
          I’m Marilyn.

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          1. So very nice to meet you, Marilyn–your writing talent inspires me to “go higher” with my own.

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  10. You have a certain way with descriptions that pulled me in from the very first line. The quiet between two people — I could almost hear the mosquito line and see the water before me.

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    1. Thank you! I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it.

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  11. […] Thankful for Six Sentence Stories and Brigid’s Diary, and the ‘mindmapping’ liturgy written for […]

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  12. Exquisite write, Misky. I sense a whisper of false dichotomy… The last sentence (once again) powerful and impactful, it is my favorite.

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    1. Thank you so much, Denise! I think it’s fair to say this won’t be a picnic.

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