0303: Six Sentence Story

Creative Commons 00, Lyon Weavers Revolt 1834 etching

Brigid’s Diary, 1834, The Loom Breathes

Episode I: Lyon France

The silk looms had been breathing all night, a wooden patience that learned anger one shuttle at a time.

By morning the steep streets of Lyon filled with canuts climbing toward the Croix-Rousse, silk thread clinging to their sleeves like pale cobwebs, their boots striking the stones in a rhythm I could feel in my ribs.

I felt myself pulled toward them because a body knows the slope of its own kind, and justice begins as a sound before it earns a name.

Felreil caught my sleeve as the crowd thickened, his fingers cold through the wool, and said nothing while the police began asking for papers in voices that already knew the answer.

We slipped sideways into a doorway that smelled of yeast and lamp oil, while somewhere above us the looms kept breathing, exact and indifferent.

If cloth remembers every tension laid into it, then perhaps this is what I was meant to learn — that some patterns tighten before they break, and that a wise body feels the pull before the threads snap and fly.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “Fly”.   Some images created with Midjourney; all writing is authentically my own original work.©Misky 2006-2026.

23 responses to “0303: Six Sentence Story”

  1. Justice begins as a sound before it earns a name

    Gobsmacked. And listening too, following the rumble and hum of Enough!

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    1. Aah (big hug) and — thanks, Liz. And isn’t that music amazing?! I love the cello.

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  2. and this is only the beginning. I love it.

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    1. (big smile) 🙏

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  3. Your musical selection conveys the sober sound of struggle and silent uncertainty underlying your story. My favorite sentence is the last, Misky, as the MC acknowledges the gift offered from that experience.

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    1. Thank you, Denise! ❤️ I just realised that I forgot to include in the title that this is Brigid’s diary, the year 1834, and Lyon’s location. I’ll fix that now.

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  4. wow…the way you weave these words! I am humbled.

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    1. And I am humbled by your lovely comment. Thank you so much.

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    1. Thank you so very much, Mimi!

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  5. So elegantly written, and I’m always looking forward to the next episode.

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    1. Thank you very much, Chris.

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  6. Nice metaphor throughout using silk looms: “a wooden patience that learned anger one shuttle at a time”

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    1. Glad that you enjoyed that.

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  7. like others, the phrase, “…justice begins as a sound before it earns a name.” just fricken leaps off the page.

    Also the line about “…wooden patience that learned anger one shuttle at a time” had a curiously personal effect… a flash-back of the short time I spent as a ‘Braider Tender’ in a textile mill.

    very good Six (and installment in your serial story)

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    1. Braider Tender: What a brilliant addition for a CV. People used to always ask me, “What’s this?” when they saw that I spent a few years doing ‘Post-Fixture per diem calculations for bulk tanker charter hire”.

      I”m delighted that you enjoyed reading this one. Thank you!

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  8. I really enjoyed reading this and thought the music at the end was a wonderful bonus!

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    1. Thank you, Jan. 🥰

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  9. Beautifully composed and the dark cello music complemented the piece perfectly ♥️🤩

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    1. Thank you so much! ❤️

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  10. The language is exquisite, leaves me hushed.

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    1. Thank you, Cale!!

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      1. You’re welcome, my pleasure.

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