2402: Brigid’s Diary – A Six

B&W photo image of an 1830s French Diligence carriage with horses, and coachmen

Part 3, Lyon, December 1834

Cathédrale Saint-Jean-Baptiste de Lyon

The Diligence carriage delivered us to Lyon in pieces, every rut a verdict, every mile a lesson in endurance.

But we had arrived, met with December’s Festival of Lights, the Rhône’s river-stink, and brightness laid over hunger like Lyon’s silk over a bruise.

Felreil and I moved with the crowd, dark wool and lowered faces, until the cathedral opened its mouth and swallowed us without welcome. He paused at the threshold, refusing to kneel where priests keep ledgers of souls — yet he stayed, watching as if staying was its own defiance.

I lit a candle not for saints but for witness, a sign to myself that sometimes the only prayer left is to make a small light and not apologise for it.

And as the flames trembled, I understood there is no arrival, only another version of leaving; yet for a moment the flame held, and that was enough to keep going.

Nunc Dimittis (with ‘Salva nos’), the Canticle of Simeon – Gregorian Chant by Petrus Josephu

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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the sign. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2026.

19 responses to “2402: Brigid’s Diary – A Six”

  1. Another diary page, sharpened for deep cuts.

    (May I just say that your prompt ability with MJ has reached tremendous levels)

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    1. We’ll be in Lyon for a few more weeks as the Canut’ Weavers’ Revolt takes hold. (historical fiction!) And thank you for the comments about the AI images. I find it enjoyable to create them.

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  2. Beautiful. Golden light in somber mood.

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    1. Thank you so much!!

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  3. Wow! Did this ever pare down to grandeur. Thos last two sentences blew me away!

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    1. I have to admit that I really like those, too. Was I right that the liturgy might surprise you by this Six?

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  4. Fabulous – and I love the ending🙌

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    1. Thank you so much! I’m delighted to hear that.

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  5. Nice way of putting it: “the only prayer left is to make a small light and not apologise for it”

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  6. Silk over a bruise feels very much like so many things which are going on right now.

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    1. It does, doesn’t it, but as long as the world doesn’t break us — we’ll be fine in the end.

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  7. This is so powerful… I almost feel I’m there. And that beautiful Song of Simeon – duende has hit me (gently).

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    1. I am more than delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you.

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  8. gotta admit, I sat back in my chair at: ‘...brightness laid over hunger like Lyon’s silk over a bruise.”

    and then the phrase in your final line “…I understood there is no arrival, only another version of leaving;”

    two words: Dude!

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    1. (laughing) Thank you, Clark.

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  9. I love this so much… especially this part: “make a small light and not apologise for it.”

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    1. Thank you so very much, Cale.

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      1. You’re so very welcome, Misky–my great pleasure.

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