1702: Ash and Interleaf

a man and woman on the rainy deck of a paddle wheel steamer on the Seine River mid-1800s

Part 2: Of Ash and Interleaf —
from Brigid’s Diary: Paris, 17 February 1833

The pages between here and the turn of the Seine have been removed, fed to the fire, their spines cracking like small bones.

Felreil says Paris is a danger made of touchpaper and of men who read silence as a lip-wet confession. Our accents are an indictment’s tinder, I say — our room’s the size of a held breath, with small, listening ears.

We kept one slip only: the prefect’s provisional pass, blue as a vein, warm as a slow brand against my skin. It grants us existence in instalments, no fixed ground beneath us, each few days a renewal we cannot afford to miss.

If you are reading this, know the ash spoke more boldly than we dared, our manner of speech in a language too hot for ink; remember us for what we did not write between syllables.


Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link.

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “ground”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2026.

26 responses to “1702: Ash and Interleaf”

    1. For anyone with a heart, this will tear it out. This is an unsurpassed comment. Mange tak, AO.

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      1. Only fitting for the caliber of this ink of yours, YO.

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  1. As always a wonderful text with a great image. I know it is not your photo but your “choice”. We only choose what we have set in our mind.

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    1. Thank you, that’s very generous for you to say so. And may I wish you both gong hei fat choy. ❤️

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  2. Gong hei fat choi or gong he xing xi to xou and Peder too 🙏☀️🎶🌹🌻🍾

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  3. The precious words in the pause.

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  4. I am… captivated, Misky. Excellent Six.

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    1. Thank you so much, Denise! Looking forward to Sunday’s new word.

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  5. Nice last phrase: “remember us for what we did not write between syllables”

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  6. Some things are too sacred to commit to paper.

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    1. Very true, Mimi. Refugees often feel that.

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  7. put me down for:

     “…It grants us existence in installments…”

    very cool

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    1. Thank you, Clark.

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  8. Words… eat them up. Very rich, I think.

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    1. Thank you, Chris. Just seeing where my ink will go if let loose.

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    1. Thank you very much.

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  9. Misky, you’ve managed to pack a high-stakes political situation and deep personal intimacy into just a few sentences. It feels less like ‘writing’ and more like a confession whispered in the dark – just wonderful 🙌

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    1. That is such a lovely and insightful comment, and very much appreciated. Thank you.

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      1. You are very welcome 🩷

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  10. The 6th sentence is the most powerful, and this all the more so: “If you are reading this, know the ash spoke more boldly than we dared, our manner of speech in a language too hot for ink;”. It leaves me hushed.

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    1. Thank you, Cale. I’m delighted that you felt its impact.

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      1. You’re most welcome!

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