1002: Six Sentence Story

B&W image of a couple standing on the deck of of a French paddle-wheel on the Rhone River

Passport Interrogation

Part 1, Calais, 12 November 1830

The paddle-wheeler pitched us into France; the quay fatigued by tides, received us without welcome, smelling of coal and old salt.

Under a dripping lamp the policeman collected our passports like birds he meant to keep, and we surrendered them as one surrenders breath to winter.

Felreil, my black-coated weather, stood taller than patience, as if a stranger’s ink could not be allowed to mark him twice—foreign ink a theft he would permit only once.

I counted my answers into his narrow ledger, my voice the smallest currency: yes to the town; sponsor, nothing more… and the clerk slid across a blue passeport provisoire as though lending us breath on credit.

The stamp thudded like a small door and the sea withdrew into its own dark breathing; Paris was named as the place where our true papers would remember us.

If the man at the Prefecture asks for more than our names, who will step ashore wearing what is left of us.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word ‘mark’.   Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2026.

30 responses to “1002: Six Sentence Story”

  1. What I said in the liturgy.

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    1. Me, too. 😂🙏
      And for anyone wanting to read it, it’s at The Liturgy

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  2. This turned out enchanted. I have a passport- have for years and have never used it. But maybe someday….

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    1. Where would you like visit, Violet?

      By the way, your comment went into spam — you’ve been set free. 🐦‍⬛

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      1. I’d love to see Iceland someday 😊

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  3. Never as welcoming to refugees, despite what is claimed.

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    1. It’s a peculiar thing about accents; it gives complete strangers permission to ask the most personal questions.

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  4. l love that Eric Sati piece.

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    1. So do I. ❤️

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  5. Nice description: “The stamp thudded like a small door and the sea withdrew into its own dark breathing”

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  6. what a beautiful little scene!

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    1. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed reading it.

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  7. Ah yes, a passport is precious… I know this so well.

    Fab music too.

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    1. So true. And now we have to jump through biometric EU stuff when we go to France or Denmark.

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  8. Olive your writing Misky beautifully poetic like:

    ’my voice the smallest currency’ 🙌

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    1. Thank you so very much! I’m delighted.

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      1. You are welcome- sorry about the ‘olive’ I really must check my messages before pressing send! It was supposed to be ‘I love’ 😅

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        1. I knew exactly what you meant so no worries. 😉

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  9. This piece, Misky, lies somewhere within the mists of evocative and haunting. I especially like this, “I counted my answers into his narrow ledger,…”

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    1. Thank you so very much, Denise!

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  10. Once you have that coveted bit of paper, you hold it with all your might.

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    1. You sure do, Mimi!

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  11. […] 8. For Denise’s Six Sentence Story. […]

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  12. Incredibly good writing, I’m fascinated by your exquisite gift.

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    1. Thank you, Cale! That’s such a lovely comment.

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      1. And a most sincere one😊

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  13. Definitely more poetry than prose – I am thinking about trying the 6 Sentence but i already have so much writing to commit too, and you set a very high bar, Marilyn…

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    1. You’re an excellent writer, and there’s no bar set by anyone at the Six Sentence Story. Give it a try, Andrew. You’ll find it’s great fun. The prompt word for this coming week is “ground”.

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