4 Feb: Six Sentence Story

B&W photo cliff of Dover viewed from at sea

Brigid’s Diary: Prologue

Brigid’s Diary: Prologue — 12 November 1830
Note: Set before the dated pages that follow.

We left England before the crows could count us, a small arithmetic of breath and bread. The field-reapers and threshers learned new names for old hungers; men with clean hands arrived asking who tended the sick, the broken — the hows, the wheres.

Felreil walked beside me like weather in a black coat, and said only Now. And the word branded the weight of danger — enough for us to cross water to France.

I watched the coast fall away and wore it under my tongue where prayers keep their salt, while he wore it where oaths warm the wrist.

If this diary survives me, let it be known: I did not flee the land, but the lie it told itself — may we be unmarked, and true to the fire that sent us.


Note: The Swing Riots (1830–1835) were agrarian uprisings across southern England. Afterward, the countryside did not return to peace. Parish authorities began to criminalise informal healers and midwives, especially women working outside church-sanctioned charity. Herbalists, midwives, and “witches” were increasingly accused of inciting unrest, blamed for livestock sickness or failed harvests, and reported under new Poor Law scrutiny (1834).

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “brand”.  Photo is not AI; it’s mine. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2026.

27 responses to “4 Feb: Six Sentence Story”

  1. “Adieu, adieu! my native shore
    Fades o’er the waters blue;
    The night-winds sigh, the breakers roar,
    And shrieks the wild sea-mew.
    Yon sun that sets upon the sea
    We follow in his flight;
    Farewell awhile to him and thee,
    My Native Land—Good Night!”

    Lord Byron, 1818

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    1. Oh tender is the heart of self-imposed exile.

      ps: there’s a note added about why they’re leaving.

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  2. wow, what an interesting story! I want to know more…

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    1. Next week, and thank you!

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  3. Great story – throughout the centuries women have had such a shit deal… and so it goes on

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    1. So it does. Thank you so much!

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  4. Such a compelling final sentence, Misky.

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    1. Thanks, Denise!

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  5. A new chapter is about to begin. I am looking forward to this.

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    1. Me, too! ❤️

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  6. I have never understood mankind’s obsession with witches. I think it must be related to and a justification for their fear of women. This was expertly written.

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    1. In my opinion, it’s because humans need to personify and control misfortune, and we’re uncomfortable with randomness. It is easier to blame a villain than an accident. Interestingly, you hear the word ‘witch’ called out during time of plague, war, economic collapse, and religious fracture. Times when randomness becomes unbearable. Times moves on; patterns repeat.

      And thank you for the lovely compliment.

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  7. Good point: May we be “true to the fire that sent us”.

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    1. Glad you liked that bit, Frank.

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  8. damn!

    familiar characters in an engaging plot… and insights/links to the record of the past

    who the hell could ask for more*

    *very oblique reference to a Netflix movie, ‘Big, Bold Beautiful Journey’ which does a thing with ‘strong language’ that totally hooked us

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    1. I don’t have Netflix, so I just read the entire plot on Wikipedia. Who needs Netflix — just google it. It sounds like a lovely romantic romp. Check back next week; Brigid and Felreil will be waiting for you.

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  9. My grandmother’s grandmother was a healer. She was curing the sick children when the doctors were killing them with their treatments and when they found out what she was doing, they threatened to cut off her hands if she didn’t stop “practicing medicine without a license.” The family moved about 80 miles away and she kept treating the ill, in secret.

    It was the 1870’s and it’s amazing how much things have changed, and how much they haven’t.

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    1. The undercurrent remains, Mimi, and to your grandmother’s grandmother may there always be those who remember her kindly and with love.

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  10. Wow, what a story! Yours and the story behind it. Powerful Six!

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    1. Thank you so much!

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  11. This is incredibly GOOD, 5-star excellent writing!

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    1. Many many thanks, Cale!

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      1. You’re welcome 😊

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  12. History repeats itself in a downward spiral, slicked by patriarchy, fear of an other, and carefully crafted lies. And so we keep moving…

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    1. Sadly this is true, and Brigid and Felreil keeping moving also, although in a different century. For them, time is never linear.

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