0202: Liturgy of Unmasking of a Beach

red hot air balloon over a stormy sea, waves, storm clouds

Liturgy: The Unmasking of a Beach (Or: Where Water Meets the Wound)

Note: This week, I am trying something completely different with my Six. Not a six sentence story (as usual) but the (anthropomorphic) psychological effects of storm-driven tides on a local beach.

I. The Withdrawal of the Sea
The tide does not come to cleanse.
It comes to unmask,
drawing out the bitter lines worn
so long they learned your shape.

No questions.
No bargains.
It recedes — and takes with it
every whispered I’m fine,
every this is just who I am,
every word branded on your bone.

II. The Marsh Laid Bare
What remains is not ruin,
but origin.

The glistening marsh beneath the story.
The tender mud no mask can grip.

You ask,
If not the salt, then what am I?
And the answer rises slow and cold:
You are something older.
Something soft.
Something still alive beneath the preservation.

III. The Exposure
You built a body of salt.
To dazzle.
To cauterise.
To remain.

…salt deceives.
preserves what can no longer breathe,
burns the wound it’s meant to protect.

When the tide takes it,
it leaves you unfinished,
a shoreline trembling with the possibility
of being something else.

IV. The Reset
True direction lives
not in the armour,
but in the skin beneath it;
wet with remembering.

Be a map
written in fluid and fragment,
routes long abandoned
in the name of survival.

Tides clear as a compass,
and you begin to feel
the direction
you were always pointing.

V. The Reveal
Let yourself be seen
not as polished,
but as possibility.

Forgive the crust you once
wore
as a face.

Stand in the tide.
Let the first draft of your true self
rise from the waterline.

Not salt-born,
but born of the silence that follows
the end of pretending.


Written as a worksheet and mind-map for Denise’s Six Sentence Story which includes the word “brand”.  Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025. Some artwork is created using Midjourney.

7 responses to “0202: Liturgy of Unmasking of a Beach”

  1. Ooooo! This is delicious! Can I expect a whittled draft on the horizon?

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    1. Maybe tomorrow, but as the ‘Note’ suggests at the top of the post, it won’t be a familiar type story Six. I’m trying something different.

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  2. Anthropomorphism reveals central human attributes.
    What a unique and intriguing concept, Marilyn!

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    1. I wonder what else I can apply this method to? It’s interesting but I had to keep walking myself back out of a narrator’s voice. I hope the Six is as interesting.

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  3. Lovely to read that, but then… that song – I know it so well, but what was it before? Such a fab place – somewhere in France (I believe), plus didn’t I see a couple of gargoyles near the top?!

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    1. The song, I think, was popularised by REM. Santiago de Compostela is located in Galicia, northwest Spain. Gargoyles, oh yes, I saw them waving — not white flags, mind you, just waving as they’re apt to do.

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      1. Ah, got it (all of those things) – thanks a lot!!

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