2101: Six Sentence Story

B&W pencil drawing of people walking in village.

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In the church across the road, up a hill too steep for cars when it snows, they gather every evening — always the same few — coats damp, smelling of wool and fish. They sit on worn pews, reciting worn prayers, asking for health, or pardon, or nothing they can name, until twilight and the lock key turns, the oak doors sealing what passed between them.

And under a roof of cold unforgiving stars, they descend the hill.

They cross the road.
They pass my house. 

It seems to me something stays behind up there, and whatever it is never follows them home.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Stories, including the word “Fish”  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2026.

23 responses to “2101: Six Sentence Story”

    1. If I could write a song with lyrics, this is the song I would’ve written for this moment during my day. I must explore more of his music — love his voice.

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  1. Wow, that final sentence leaves me wondering, leaves me hanging, wondering about the unforgiven…

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    1. Thank you! That means I’ve managed to write a good hinge in the story.

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  2. wonderful writing Misky says so much in few words yet leaves me wanting to know much more🙌

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    1. Many thanks for your lovely comment. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.

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  3. Ooh, fascinating… and a bit scary I imagine. Love that picture up there, by the way!

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    1. I created the picture using Midjourney, so it’s a.i., Chris, but it did take me a good long time to finally tweak the wording of the prompt so that the left side blurred and echoed the right side. I wanted an image that was more like how my eyes perceived that moment — it’s never complete; the centre is slightly askew and periphery is always a “ghosted space” to my brain. I’m really quite delighted that you like it. Thanks.

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      1. Gosh, how clever to do a picture that way. Very satisfying.

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  4. They are interceding for those that have gone before them, petitioning for themselves and those who are yet to go and some are probably seething- at some foible of life as we know it. They are the Ladies Rosary Society.

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    1. That makes sense because our village church, which dates back to the time of the Norman Conquest, is simultaneum — both Church of England and Catholic services are held there.

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  5. create ‘atmosphere’* much?

    am I the only one getting a Lovecraft vibe? a few delicate notes of the Old Ones

    *which to some of us, is the subtle altering of the place we are reading such stories…

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    1. I’ve never read Lovecraft, and I think it might be time to change that. Winter is for reading.

      As for atmosphere, Sussex drips with the stuff during the winter, and with the first hint of spring, it throws off its salty fog like a harlot wanting attention.

      Delighted that you liked this one. A bit of a change, eh?

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  6. Nicely told. It made me think that they should invite the one they prayed to to come home with them.

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    1. Thank you, Frank. Might be a good idea!

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  7. It’s so sad. I agree with Frank, if nothing follows you home, you’ve gone in vain.

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    1. We will hope that their voices were heard, Mimi.

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  8. Exquisite piece of writing, Misky. Sentences “cut to the bone”, evoking so much more for their leanness.

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    1. Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.

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    1. Thank you, Cale, that’s very kind.

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