1301: Six Sentence Story

night scene at a bar, woman dressed in black, black hair, dim lights in the background

Dancing with Lions

She anchors her black stiletto heel to the bar stool; the ritual wait for a man that doesn’t exist, polishing the fantasy of him until it shines.

A muffled laugh works loose, a private rebellion echoing in her throat — the kind you make when a voice you invent leans in and whispers to the hollow of your ear; gin can be like that, a soft liar, a collaborator in rounding off the jagged edges of a loneliness.

She smirks as a filthy joke lifts to the surface: her true flag, a raw and honest thing, a reminder that her humour sits closer to the bone than the vows she no longer rehearses; she scans this liminal space of lacquered light and cigarette ghosts.

Who else, she wonders, holds this same hollow silence beneath the chatter and electric buzz in the Six Sentence Bistro & Café.

“…Brigid?”

The bartender’s voice cuts cleanly through the spell, reminding her that even lions pause when someone knows your name.

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The title of this Six is borrowed from the featured song. Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “vow”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2026.

20 responses to “1301: Six Sentence Story”

  1. This was so visually perfect. I love being privy to its original bones.

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    1. Thank you! Part 2 next week.

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    1. Thank you, N! 🙏

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  2. Spellbound… with Brigid and Denise. What an entrance!

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  3. Nice last sentence. One’s name cuts through the spell.

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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    1. Thank you, Mimi!

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    1. Thank you, Cale!

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  4. […] week’s Six Sentence Stories. I had a lot of fun writing this […]

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  5. You know how to whistle, don’t you Sam? Just put your lips together and blow…

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    1. I love that movie. ❤️

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  6. Very cool, Misky. Goes to show, you just never who may show up at the Six Sentence Cafe & Bistro 😎

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    1. Very true. 😀

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